You need to be more consistent with the soldiers/scouts thing (or drop it altogether and just call 'em Senshi) but other than that there is no constructive critisism for me to give. Maybe it's a little too much of a coinkydink that Olivia just picked up Mooney while she was exactly the person she'd been looking for...?

Ooooh. I love these types of stories.
Hey, I'm writing one of these types of stories, and I'm having a bit of trouble. Could you please e-mail me on how to write them? Pretty please? Since you obviously know how to do so very well, I could use the help!

I love this story more then can be explained in words. I find it sad though that Jenn, Olivia, and Darien won't remember their past or even meeting. And that the two will forget the past week. I really hope and pray that you write a sequel to this most awesome, well-written, and truly the best fanfiction I have ever ever read. It touched me deep inside and almost made me cry. Onegai, onegai write a sequel. Arigatou!

I love it! Thanx so much for writing!!!

VERY cool. *grins*

I've only read the first two chapters so far, but I'm reading the third tomorrow! Or today, depends on how you look at the time. *gives a sideways glance at her clock* I can't sleep. ANYWAY!! Lookit! Lookit! I'm Courtney/Sailor Andromeda! MWHAHAHAHA!!! *cackle* I ROCK! Anyway, I personally think you write Sailor Moon better than anything else! You just capture its feel...SO WELL!! I dunno!? When I read it, it's just so....Sailor Moon, ya know!? And as for this series, I adore how little Sailor Polaris and Tux interact with each other. It's just too darlin'!! Oh, but I see something wrong with the first chapter!? *peers at it* Like... It doesn't show the whole thing!? It stops abruptly!? *gasp* How can that BE!? Anywho, just to point that out! ^^ Oh, and beware of some typos, if ya know what I mean!! But I'm not the one to talk. *huggles Malachite and her imaginary Jadite (i don't care how you really spell his name! *cry*) then walks off*

I've only read the first two chapters so far, but I'm reading the third tomorrow! Or today, depends on how you look at the time. *gives a sideways glance at her clock* I can't sleep. >

You got some writing skills going ^_^ I liked this.

Sigh...I knew I wasn't the only one who had a Sailor Polaris. She looks different than yours, though. Pretty good story.