impressive as usual keep riteing , awesome storys i LOVE SUSPENSE a fan/reader

Wow! That was AWESOME! This whole story was filled with awesomeness! And I don't even know if that is a word! Get the third story out QUICKLY! Please!?!?

yay woot indeed -mrbeans

A good ending to part the second.

But now Johnny has your home address! What if his posse of evil motorcycle-riding buddies shows up and spray paints your house or something? THEN WHAT?

Steven turning to the good side reminds me of his parents. I wonder what happened to them? Do you think they're still out in the wilderness, trying to find sustenence? I should make a shirt or something that says "I *heart* Steven's parents." Mhm.

Ooh, I can definitley see your new power coming in useful in the future. Very cool.

Looking forward to part 3!

YAY! COMPLETED!! =p Cant wait till the typed version of part 3

WOOT! Yay I'm so proud of Rocky.. Appologising and all. I finally get my Bat wings. That makes me happy. Good job, can't wait for the third to come out.

Rocky you suck.. another cliffy your just to mean Lol. Anyhoo, good so far, noticed a few minor spelling errors, but other then that it rocked. Love the breakdancing, don't even think Tony Hawk could DO those moves.

NO! you...urgh! I'm suposed to be evil! Update soon or I'll have my neighbor sick his dog on you! -mrbeans

damn! even though I only have to wait seconds your cliff hanger is still (in the words of Dr. Evil) "...Evil, MUHAHAHHAHAHAAH" -mrbeans

Yay emotion! I was afraid this site was devoid of it. -mrbeans

I write movies so I definatly have to respect your descriptive writing. Still going strong. -mrbeans

interestly circumstantial, eh? -mrbeans

Woot review time! Wow another cliffhanger. How could you?!?! oh well hopefully for Rocky, Slade will shoot himself in the head! XD LMAO Well anyway nice chapter! =3

Slade's using water and electricity at the same time?! That's dangerous!!

Okay, so I was all prepared to celebrate when you beat him and everyone got their powers back, but then you got shot! How could he... That's just... I can't even... Darn you again, Slade!

yay! I need say no more.

-mrbeans