Hi,
I really enjoyed this story. Please tell me you are going to finish it.

The way you've mixed the Sentinal and M7 families together is great. But you set that up in your ATF stories.

Your descriptions are very compelling and bring the reader into the story.

Keep up the good work.

you, my dear, have the most admirable trait to make a story seem so unappealing (to my tastes) and let it stay online for a period of time, like bait just dangling from a hook,and when i have the time to explore a little further, end up catching another avid fan. not everyone can do this to me! a very rare gem indeed and may i say that i am, like my fellows, now intently wondering what plight our boys will find themselves in the future.

yes, true that i didn't want to read this or "the human factor", and yet you drew me in and now i can't leave it alone. you have my deepest admiration and respect, as well as my condolences because i admit that i will pester for more...

and getting off the soapbox, i have to ask what the trunk entails. and if one of vins grandfathers married a standish, does that mean vin and ez are family? and what are the chances that they would meet blair sandburg's descendants or the ellisons?

from your newest fan,
Hyper

Just found this story and I really enjoyed the AU. Wonder if your going to finsh it in 2009. You have done a great job so far.

Wow - this story is fantastic. Very creative and catching. You paint an interesting future.

Looking forward to the rest!

Another interestig universe with the expectation of courtroom intrigue and shenanigans by evil doers, all bigotry and very little true intelligence. Sic 'em Ez. Now that dear mother is in the mix along with a tenacious redhead, things should be heating up rather badly for the offensive ones. Looking forward to it.

Loved seeing Maude in this. Can't wait to see what'll happen next.

Great to see more of this fic. Things are moving ahead very well and everyone is safe. Ezra is priceless and love that he had stayed there before and knew enough to get a bell hop. Vin is really enjoying the trip; the Rom know how to treat a Sentinel and it's great to hear there are children Sentinels being protected. Maude had so much fun getting the trunk from the soldiers; she didn't even break a sweat. Thanks for this part and I'm looking forward to the next part.

I so hate the wait but these chapters are so delicious I can almost stand waiting for more.

Maude is marvelous. I've forgotten (if we knew) what is in the trunk?

Sweet!! Loved it! Hee hee That's right get them to get the trunk! Oh Lord! Great story!

HA! -ROFL- Trust Maude; only she would wear choir robes with only a garter belt under them! :D Strike one for Maude! Absolutely hilarius, luv. Maude's character is just right; hope we see more of Naomi in the future!

Great chapter! I love it. :) Maude is good and somehow I can believe her doing that while singing in the choir. Looking forward to more, please update soon. Take care,

Mouse

It was wonderful to see an update to this...one of my favorites. I like the Gypsies they're very wise and intuitive. The bond between Chris and Vin continues to deepen if that brief flare of jealousy was any indication. Good thing Demetri quickly soothed Larabee's ruffled feathers. Vin seems to be stronger...not as unstable since his bonding and acquiring all these willing friends as he journeys closer to Cascade. I couldn't help but wonder if some of the other 'helpers' in the different towns along their path will show up and add support to his cause.

It nice to see the others made it all in one piece. Their bantering and bickering was entertaining. That will go a long way towards helping Vin when he arrives and all of his clan is all right.

I quite enjoyed Maude's con at the railway station. That woman is slicker than a bucket of worms in spit. She snookered those men good!!

Well...at least all the players are nearing Cascade! Thanks for another chapter, and please hurry back with more!

Fabulous chapter, just what the doctor ordered. Loved Maude's performance, can't wait for the next chapter.

Maude and Ezra are certainly something else. I love this story and it is good to see the Standish's using their wiles to get their way.

Thanks
Calia