That was incredible. That's about all I can say- it's left me speechless.

Wow.

That was SO freaking shiney!! My mouth was literally hanging open... woah! Is Guevera from Dark Angel? (I realize it is a last name but... one never knows)

-I'd love it if you'd r and r my fic!

As I said, totally awesome!

wow. I dont think i've read any thing that hooked me as fast as this did ... ever! Very well written!