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xOx-gaasaku-4ever-xOx
2008-08-03
ch 16,
abuseGreat Story! update soon

gaasaku4ever
lili125
2008-07-28
ch 16, anon.
abusethis is awesome i hope you update soon and also will Gaara really kill Sakura?
Toxica
2008-07-11
ch 16,
abuseFinally! i got to catch up on the story- ive been too lazy to sort through my emails hehe, but im glad i finally got around to it because once again you have produced 2 incredibly well written chapters. Please hurry up & write the next chapter; i think my brain might explode thinking over the possibilities concerning the last 8 or so sentences of the chapter. Keep up the good work =3
darkly-cute-cherry-blossom
2008-07-09
ch 16,
abuseyour pretty good i love your story! cant wait to see well read whats next :)
Saayu-chan
2008-07-07
ch 16,
abuseSorry it took me so long to review on this one, I was away on vacation and didn't have much computer access. This was a GOOD chapter. Every chapter I feel like I understand more of what occurred in previous chapters, but it also raises new questions. Always keeps me on my toes.

You are a very talented author. I can't ever seem to finish anything I start. Ugh, so annoying.

I look forward to the next chapter, quite anxiously.
Your faithful fan,
*Saayu-chan
EvilFaerie17
2008-07-03
ch 16,
abuseWhoa, okay, so now they hate her. Well, maybe except Gaara. This was a good chapter! I liked the interaction between Gaara and Sakura, and I laughed at Temari's little, "Neko-chan! Where are you?" skit. It was so un-Temari that it was funny. :]

SO, hm, what exactly happened to make all of those experiments happen so that Sakura would live? Was she gonna die? From what? I must know! So please update as soon as you can! Oh, that last line, there, very creepy. I liked it!

ttfn!
EvilFaerie17
Artemis 85
2008-06-28
ch 16,
abusedude this is hot! update soon!
Sakura5605
2008-06-26
ch 16,
abuseI love this story, I'm hooked and at the end of each chapter i'm left wanting more...excelent work. ^^
OneDeadlySin
2008-06-24
ch 16,
abusethis was so just a filler..

WRITE MORE... who_re...
Kuro-bara (didn't log in)
2008-06-24
ch 16, anon.
abuseYEah! a new chapter keep it up!
Sinister-Chan
2008-06-24
ch 16,
abuseWhoa very cool
Although I'm still confused O_O
And was that cat's name Ino? XD
Saara-chan
2008-06-24
ch 16, anon.
abuseAH!
I love it!
I had read the first few chappies you had put up before but then I saw that you hadn't posted anything for a long time so I figured you had let this story wither and die into a sad nonexistant ending
and then I start looking around for something new to read( I had not had computer access for a while) and I see to my joy
YOU HAD UPDATED AGAIN!
I love you
I love your story
I love how the plot is different from any I have ever read before
and this is not just a stupid high school story
it is much better
YEA YOU!
Tons of hugs from your adoring fan
Saara-chan
soccercrazyfreak
2008-06-23
ch 16,
abusethis is great i cnt wait to see what happens keep up the great work
USWeasilgirl
2008-06-23
ch 16,
abusegrawr! must know what happens next!
Silver Moon Vampire
2008-06-23
ch 16,
abuseUpdate.
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