Wow, I read this like a year ago, but forgot to fav it. So after tons of searching, I found it again and lucky me, a new chapter was added! Axel needs to have a talk with Zexy about Dem and set him straight. Well, not straight, but er you know what I mean. And I'm gonna miss tiny Roxas, but I am excited to see what becomes of him and Axel. And hey! I work at Wal-Mart. Though I decorate cakes, I don't sell fish. I could make a cake that looks like a fish though. Or maybe some ramen! XP Can't wait for the next update.

AW I loved this chapter, Roxas is so adorable! I hope you finish this story up soon because I absolutely love it! I think you captured the characters very well, especially Axel. And wittle woxas is so frickin cute! * squeezes him till he turns blue*

i read this whole story and i fucking love it! awesome!

*giggles* I got the skeeball part.
Kinky indeed. ;3

aw man come on... update already... i wanna finish the story... Its getting really good!

update soon

I really enjoyed the whole story. I read parts of it to my brother and he enjoyed as well. There are some spelling errors and grammar mistakes but their so small it doesn't make a difference. I love how high the emotions are running. It is just like what I’ve heard a thousand times before but told in such a way that it doesn't seem like that. I listened to the song that you mentioned in the summary and i must say that you have excellent taste. It really fits the story and i'm eagerly awaiting you to update. My brother is also waiting for the next chapter. I know it's not the end yet or it can't possibly be. Update soon.



Sincerely yours,




Pyro Psychotic


PS. Sorry for the confusing review. When I read a story I really like, I tend to babble. What I mean to say is “great story and can’t wait for you to update.” But instead it comes as what is above. And that seems perfect in my deranged mind, or “ferpect” as my brother would say.

Oh.My.God!
You TOTALLY have to write more to this, it's amazing! It's a really creative idea too.
It's also very sad... It made me cry... Multiple times! I don't even know why! It's just amazing.

Don't stop your story here, your doing so well!
I've been reading this for the past week and I'm absolutely hooked :) You are a very well rounded writer

-snorts- The author note... FTW
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I found this on some fanart site... I think it was fanart. com or something...

Loving it...

i really am enjoying reading this fic!:) its so CUTE and funny lol! i love Axel and roxas in here!<3 i can't wait to see more!:D

plzn write more of the chapter soonb i cannt wait to read more , im so excited to see how everything plays out, im hoping we start to see some demyx and zexion soon, and i cannt wait to see more of akuroku,
love this story.. update soon

kya! i so love this story! please tell me that you'll be continuing it, oh, please, pretty pretty please with a cherry on top update soon. ^^ hope to hear from ya, love ya and ur work!

cool plz write more son=]