Wow So... This Is so cute. Love It!

M, very nice story. I would have liked a few more chapters from Clark's POV in the early parts of the stories, but I think that's more of a personal preference thing than something that would have made the story better. I actually didn't like the movies very much, but I LOVE the "Lois and Clark" television show and that got me hooked on fanfiction. This story really handled a lot of the awkwardness of the movies well; I could see the scenes unfolding. Thanks for the fun ride!

*SPOILERS*

Very good. I enjoyed reading this a lot. The only thing that didn't really work for me was the rushed engagement/wedding following so closely on the heels of everything else. Lois and Clark seemed to have learned a lesson about acting on impulse after the results of giving up his powers and the memory wipe, but now they get married right away? Anyways, that's just my two cents... Like I said, I think this is very well done. Thank you for writing this.

GAH! Cliff-hanger!

But what an AWESOME story, I could *NOT* stop reading it. It was an emotional rollercoaster from the beginning and you did not let us down. I mean, technically, the events happened in the matter of a few days... but, they are so in love, *nothing* can or should keep them apart. The way you wrote it, the events, their turmoils, their situations... it just made sense, and I liked your explanations for things (like the pregnancy, memories, the Fortress). Fantastic job I'm glad to say.

So now let me answer your questions... :)
1. Most memorable part? Hmm... that's so hard! I suppose the part where they are on the balcony and they finally give into their passions. Or wait... when they are talking when they are trapped in the lead/kryptonite room. And the fairy-tale.

2. That Lex Luthor was not the main villain but that you still kept his presence. Also that you managed to keep Richard's character likeable and believable.

3. Definitely Clark's (from everything, I guess!). And Richard's, after he learns of Superman's true identity.

Anywho, thanks for the great story and I'll see if you have a sequel and look into your favorites for more great Clois stories.

Fantastic job!

This chapter was absolutely heartbreaking and so sweet.

I teared up. :(

Gah! I want a happy ending, but Richard... I just really like him, too. Seriously, why does he have to be so... nice?

GAH!

Darn it! Kids make the situation even more complicated, don't they? Especially at such a young age like Jason. But he's an intuitive and smart little boy so I hope that he gets through okay. :)

(Jeez, like if he's a real character! But the story makes it real in your mind, I guess).

Great job with the emotional depth. :)

Hee, thanks for your reply. I sometimes end up finding older fanfictions that were completed (even years ago!)... and just until recently I began reading Superman fanfiction.

I'm caught up in the suspense of these last few chapters! Written exceptionally well, by the way, great pacing and I understood it clearly. I'm glad I sort of had a day off today because I can't keep away from the story.

*goes off to read some more*

Your story so far... I could imagine this as a sequel to Superman Returns. It makes sense, answering the question of Richard truly believing Jason was his son (if he really did believe it), Lois and her returning memories... and let us see what you do with the Luthor situation (probably something cool).

Great job. :)

"She considered her answer. As much as she was still angry with Clark for lying to her for years, she deeply felt the weight of his secret. Is this what it’s like? To keep an important truth from someone you love, because you fear they won’t be able to handle it? "- Ooh! I like how you've had Lois' situation with Richard compare with Clark's & hers. I'm glad she is seeing it, albeit a little bit, from both sides.

Very considerate your writing is. :) Definitely not flat characters.

Just wanted to quickly say, that you are doing a fantastic job at keeping everyone in character, and their emotional dilemma is great. Your pace is perfect and your writing is great as well.

Now on to the rest of the story... :)

1) Clark bursts into the lead/Kryptonite lined room, and rushes to embrace Lois.

2) The round-about connection between V. and Lex.

3) Clark-asking Lois to marry him. Clark-the chap 4 lunch. Richard-telling Perry about the relationship change

Such a fabulous job!

So good!

OOH. GHEY HAD THE PERFECT WEDDING!

Oh! SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER

OMFG! This story is so good!