 Iridescent Bookworm 8/12/11 . chapter 4love the suspense |
 yellow.r0se 7/22/11 . chapter 15Loved this story! Absolutely amazing!' |
 ItaSaku29 7/22/10 . chapter 15Aw, this was good! I loved your story idea! |
 NewMrs.Edward Cullen 12/1/07 . chapter 14this was a really good story! |
 jmt5887 3/9/07 . chapter 15I told you before but I'd thought I'd say it here too. Great story. I loved it all the way through. |
 Kelsey 9/15/06 . chapter 1 Omg! i |
 Elemental Warrior 9/13/06 . chapter 15Shame it had to come to an end, but all good stories have to at some point. Good to see that the story is more realistic than most fics I've read, most of them end up with a romantic scene at the end, but you've managed to keep it within reason. Good luck with other stories.
LyokoWarrior |
 melcho 9/13/06 . chapter 15 congratulations for your job! it was fantastic, and ill be grateful if you make a sequel. continue wrutting like this and good luck! |
 Japanese-Fanatic 9/13/06 . chapter 15Ahh, that was cute! Great story, tell me when you write an other!
JapaneseFanatic
(AKA Lyokogal7503, you know that :)) |
 Eve Sunset 9/10/06 . chapter 14Hurry up and get the other chapter out here! |
 melcho 9/10/06 . chapter 14 upload soon! its fantastic! i cant wait any longer! good luck! |
 Japanese-Fanatic 9/10/06 . chapter 14This is getting so good! Continue ASAP!
JapaneseFanatic
(So you know I used to be Lyokogal7503!) |
 Elemental Warrior 9/10/06 . chapter 14Oh no! Yumi is all alone what will she do? Hahahah! Anyway great chapter as always, I hope Yumi gets her eye sight back soon. Yes, puking on the author is not nice, but it sure would be hilarious! Lol! Update soon.
LyokoWarrior |
 Elemental Warrior 9/8/06 . chapter 13Well, that seems like the question of the day. Will Yumi get back her sight?, I hope so. Yes, I like this chapter, I wouldn't be reviewing if I didn't. Don't worry I won't puke on you, unless I'm in an evil mood. Lol. Update soon!
LyokoWarrior |
 melcho 9/7/06 . chapter 13 upload soon! |