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| Backroads 2006-08-21 ch 1, | abuseExtremely realistic and well-done. Sometimes it's hard to see dysfunctional families when they really do take issue with it, but it does happen. Both Lily and Petunia are very human here, and I can actually almost see where Petunia is coming from. She is the way she is and there is no changing that. I really like Lily's objective here, and I can't say I really blame her. Excellent work. |
| Mrs.RonaldWeasley1991 2006-07-14 ch 1, | abuseI liked this...Petunia is a bitter and jealeous mess and Lily handles it very well...if it were me, I would forget about Petunia as well |