aw!

I very much enjoyed your story. It brought out the truly ugly side of war. I realize HP is all fiction, but war is not. I agree with your other reviewers, you need to continue this story in a sequel or at least by adding an epilog. Thanks for your time and efforts in writing.

NO! why did you stop it? it was so good! do you have a sequel?

Oh i loved it:D... Poor snape and hermione, i'm so glad that she could be able to concieve now:D...you should really continue on with this story, it's great:D
peace and luve,
janie

why!?! why did you stop it was so good i love it!! you are an awesome writer keep on writing!

great story

Very emotional story. Nice happy ending. Are you going to do a sequel?

A raw emotional story...well written and assembled. I cried! But you gave me a happy ending, and that's important. Overall, you did an excellent job and I thank you for it.

Snape kills dumbldore and goes to lord voldie( i like that name)

What a great story. I'm putting it down as one of my favorites. I like that you are able to get so much emotion and plot across in three chapters. You're writing is elegant in its simplicity.

Aw dang it! I wanted to read about her meeting with her friends! Could you write another chapter? Pweeaase? For me?

I'll give you chocolate, any kind you want! Dark, milk, white, with almonds, without nuts, truffles, Belgian, the kind with the creamy chocolate inside, any you want if you write about her meeting with Ron, Ginny and Luna, AND how she meets Arthur!

Right, I'm going to put this story on my alerts and I want to get an email soon saying that you've updated, or at least a reply telling me why you're not going to!

Bossy, aren't I?

Pwease?

~Lara

Lovely, simply lovely

What? That's the end! No! It can't be the end. I absolutely love this story! Please, just one more chapter??

NO!

Why did you end it there!? WHY!?

Ok, my only criticism for this story is ending it there. There is still the unresolved prospect of whether Hermione can have children (unless I missed part of the story) and how she reunites with her parents, and a resolution for Snape.

Sorry, I just have this belief that before you end a story, everything must be resolved, unless you are planning a sequel.

So yeah, that is my input. I hope it is helpful, and I especially hope that I didn't offend you in any way. I hope that there are more installments, and if there are none, I still enjoyed the story, just not the feeling that there is more to be explained.

Adios and godnight!!

-=-Akemi Akibi

Great Story! Love the Ending.