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| Gear's Girl 2007-02-03 ch 6,  | abusegood god...poor nick! Keep writing, you are doing a great job. |
| Senator Elizabeth Organa 2006-07-19 ch 6, | abusethis is really good! is this going to be a NS story? just wondering... i loved it. UPDATE SOON! |
| Joseph 2006-07-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI enjoyed reading your story. I thought the camaraderie demonstrated by the members of the team was refreshing and inspiring. The pain that Nick was feeling was palpable. My one critique was that the term "bad guy" seemed inappropriate and a more derogatory term would have fit better. |
| nickysbabygirl 2006-07-16 ch 6, | abuseAww poor Nick and Catherine. I really love this story and I look forward to more. I love how Sara is helping Nick. |
| wraiths-angel 2006-07-16 ch 6, | abuseLets hope that Nick can convince Cathrine it wasn't her fault and is there anything more to happen to him or just the recovery stage, Looking forward to finiding out and hope the next chapter comes soon!! |
| Jackson 2006-07-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseJenna I really want to see this on T.V. this was so well written! Is there going to be a sequel? This may become a new addiction for me lol. |
| Faith 2006-07-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseJenJen this is good! email me on firstclass!! |
| AlexCurtis 2006-07-11 ch 5, | abusegood |
| AlexCurtis 2006-07-11 ch 1, | abuseA 419 is police code for a homocide not a B&E |
| jsk 2006-07-09 ch 5, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed the story. I found the growing bond between Nick and Sara very interesting and would like to learn how it progresses. one strength was the elaboration of the support from the team that Nick received during the difficult recovery from his injuries. Excellent medical details throughout. This reader is looking forward to additional chapters, perhaps involving more crime solving and the emotional interactions among the main characters. |
| Maureen 2006-07-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseGreat story so far. Keep going. I want to read more!! |
| wraiths-angel 2006-07-04 ch 5, | abusethis is really good and I enjoyed, I hope there is more because i am sure Nick and Cathrine will want to talk and I know Nick is feeling guilty! Looking forward to some more chapters! |
| missiemeghan 2006-07-03 ch 5, | abuseVery good..Is there more? |
| somebody101 2006-07-02 ch 5, | abuseYou have a lot of good ideas here, and you're putting them together well. It is an interesting story, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it. You may want to try and draw out more parts, and take a more in depth look at some of the emotions of the characters. It might also help to add more details pertaining to their emotions and physical traits. You're doing a good job, and I hope you keep going with this story. It has a lot of potential. |