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| MarauderetteLily 2008-01-27 ch 1,  | abuseAWW soo sweet! i havent finshed reading the last book yet but i read the bit where he died. i luve kittynat! |
| MaxB88 2006-08-26 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful :) |
| Sniffles 2006-08-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhy couldn't Nathaniel still be a jerk? Why did he have to go all repentant and noble and, and...I said I wouldn't cry over this... *melts into a puddle of tears* Your poem sums it up so well. You could probably make the first half shorter, just to clean it up a little. I love the conclusion. *sniff* |
| Random-History 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abuseIt is very good...and i understand what you are saying...why couldn't he have been stupid one more time...instead he goes and dies for mankind...jerk |
| cassiejennahermione 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abusePretty good, but it needs to flow more near the end. |
| lamanta 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseHello. I´ve just read the last book of the triology and just wanted to say that these are exactly my feelings at the moment. Thank you for this wonderful peice of art, Lamanta |
| HPLB 2006-07-25 ch 1, | abuseWell done. Bittersweet and well worded. |
| Seshata 2006-07-21 ch 1, | abuse*sniff* |
| Beckettsbabe09 2006-07-10 ch 1, | abuseOH! Its so good. I could just kill Stroud for killing him off! |
| Baybie Sha 2006-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseu noe hu dis iz girl!lolz. dat wuz actually a good poem...even thou i neva read da book=P. it wuz obvious...it took meh more than 15 minutes on the phone 2 figure out da name of da book. ah well...u noe ur a good writer. i dun have 2 say nuthin bout dat...so...great job! now realli, dat WUZ a great poem, it wuz heart-touching, nicely written..and reviewed by ur bestest frend!lolz.well, keep up the good work, and i'll talk 2 u later. |
| baby-blue-angel91 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abuseyes, I know all too well who you are =) |
| you know who i am =D 2006-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice job 'babybluenangel' -__- nice username. very original. mmhmm. anyhow, keep writing those barte-whatshisname fics. =) |
| LandUnderWave 2006-07-03 ch 1, | abuseIt's so sad...(sniff) You even managed to make it rhyme! Jonathon Stroud is cruel. |
| Jennie 2006-07-03 ch 1, | abuseIn general, I usually don't read poetry. not really my thing. But since I had read the other fics that have been updated recently and I was trying to avoid filling out Uni applications (bane of my existance at the moment), I decided to read. Wonderful job. I always love it when a fic surprises me (in a good way) *grins* The way you kept the rhyme, the way you managed to get behind her feelings in such a way that almost made me cry... Lovely. You did an excellent job and now I've learned the lesson to not necessarily turn my back on poetry- when it's done by you, at least. |
| AgiVega 2006-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThis almost made me cry. Beautifully written, and it even rhymes! *claps enhusiastically* |