i love this soo much so why havent you updated :'( im crying at the fact you havent updated in like forever ... im not actually crying but i will soon if you dont. :)

wow. this story is AMAZING! seriously if I didn't know better, I'd say you were lemony snicket.

please continue!

Please, please, please, PLEASE continue! It's such a good story!

Please, please, PLEASE continue. This is a really good story!!

Im gonna give you lots of reveiws. your like my favourite author on fanfiction i love your stories and i am realy eager to read more so update soon. I think i'll die if i can't read more of this fantastic storie. I hope there is a lot of quiglet in the follwing chapters please put some quiglet in it pretty,pretty please with a cherry on top.

I love it!

please write more i love your creative ideas and im realy looking forward to reading more about the ball

Dear Miss Sumpter:

You know, the Snicket style really isn't that hard to imitate successfully, and yet it always delights me no end when I see someone doing so. I guess some people are just easy to please. Anyway, thank you.

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

>w< Lovely chapter as usual~ Oh man, xD; Things are really getting down! Hohoho...

Can't wait for the next update. Keep it up!

Ahahaha! Poor man...or woman. Love the personality you've given him. Or her. ^^;

Definitely loved his/her outburst of being replaced. Nice work as usual. Moving on! -scrambles to read-

...wow. Olaf and company sure are 'resourceful'...

xD;; Seriously, servants...o3o Equivalent of slave! How exciting, lawl. Nice work on this chapter, >w< Must read on! -marches off-

Good grief! You certainly captured Esme well, xD;; I especially liked the way you made her introduction parallel to her book-self, OwO


God Carmelita...She's still as cakesniffy in this. =_= Well, one must bear with it!

I really liked the story. The cinderella twist was very cute. Keep writing it!! :)

Yay, the plot thickens! I still really love how you have the perfect Lemony Snickett writing style, please update soon!