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| Story Weaver1 2008-07-18 ch 7,  | abuseThat's some pretty werid, and very funny, **. I'd say myfavorite part was Itatchi being a Big Brother. "We are the Borg!" LOL! Then their were the running gags -Naruto his love/hate with the 'loli side' -Sakura ad her forgetting every loop that she was '12 and flat' |
| justanotherguyathiscomputer 2008-07-06 ch 7, | abuseThis was gold. I can't wait till the next update. Please let it be soon. PLEASE! -justanotherguyathiscomputer |
| Gundum M 2008-07-05 ch 7, | abuselmao at that last chapter |
| RockBane 2008-07-03 ch 7, | abuseOne Word: Freaky. O_O |
| NarcoGuy 2008-07-03 ch 7, | abusegreat chapter, there is nothing better than a well done omake at about 10:20 on a thursday night (boredom at its best) |
| Narutomaniac 2008-06-27 ch 7, | abuseHilarious except for the Sasgay having sex even henged with Hinata it ticked me off she has the Byakugan and is a good Kunoichi she wouldn't be fooled by a henge she'd see through it even without the Byakugan take that out and it's funny as hell. |
| kyugan 2008-06-25 ch 7, | abuseYou must continue the loop! Also, by loli's...you wouldn;t mean Hanabi would you? And as for Sasuke's half-sisters, are they your own design, actual characters, or are they from a nother fic you're working on? Please let me know what you mean, it's eating me up! |
| kzinti7 2008-06-24 ch 7, | abuseROFLAO |
| Tatsu-ZZmage 2008-06-24 ch 7, | abusethat was some crazy loops. ^_~ hehehehe you must have been smoking the good stuff writing that. |
| Sdarian 2008-06-24 ch 7, | abuseThis would be pretty great if you turned it into a full story. I have read another one (Chunin Exam Day) which is really good, but also quite focused on breaking the loop and fixing things. However, your story seems to be based more on Naruto doing whatever he wanted to (which would be my reaction to this happening to me) and having a bunch of fun. Anyway, good job! |
| BlackKyuubi 2008-06-23 ch 7, anon. | abuseYou just had to do the raccoon joke didn't you? and the whole Sakura the wonder **? priceless |
| Adyen 2008-06-22 ch 7, | abuseYa... about Groundhog’s Day idea based fic... /s/3929411/1/ Chunin Exam Day works fine. :D |
| Wonderbee31 2008-06-22 ch 7, | abuseInsane! Loved this take on the Groundhog day scenario, considering all things went for all of them. |
| Mutsunokami 2008-06-22 ch 7, | abuseAFOTCLOL! |
| Firehedgehog 2008-06-22 ch 7, | abusecackles evilly, lovely one-shot..hopefully two-shot |