Wow. I think this is one of the best Cloud/Aerith fics I've ever read. No, seriously. The descriptions, the story, the characters, everything is captured perfectly. Why'd you leave it on such a cliffhanger? D: I noticed that you haven't updated in a while and I just hope that you manage to add another chapter to this amazing story.

wow. totally blows me away. great job!

this is such a good story! Please continue to write more of this as well as other stories because you are truly gifted..i couldnt find a single piece you wrote that i didnt fall completely in love with :)

You are the first one to make me graphically see images in my head. Congratulations on this fine achievement. I usually just hear a narrator, but no, you rock!

Hey, I already reviewed for Ch.8 so I had to review here. Why aren't you updating. T_T I want to see the ending so much. I hope you haven't left this fic for dead.

I agree with Cali and EagleAmor.
First time i also felt bad for Tifa. I almost cried for the first few
chapters,but i told my self not to.
It was a good fanfic for FFVII,I hope you update soon to ease my heart.

Dattebayo!

Gahh! This is so sweet and romantic.I love the story structure .I only read four chapters (To chapter Land and sea).But I am completely loving this story.It's little heartbreaking to think of FFVII with this story though.You make Clouds personality perfect.The glances you make Cloud give Aerith from the car were so sweet!

This is the first time I ever really felt bad for Tifa too :[
I love your story and i t hank you for it!

your number 1 fan,Cali .

I was very happy when I read your story. Wonderful one indeed. you were successful in writing about the character's feelings and emotions. Keep on good work. I know that life isn't always blissful but at least don't make sad ending here. I will feel very sorry if Cloud has to go through this pain again. So please don't do that. Anyway, I wish you good luck in your exams and school because that is obviously prevent you from writing. I will wait for your update patiently.

A very fluffy story that has turned quite dark. I find it interesting how Cloud's determination to not lose Aeris almost caused him to lose her again, prematurely. If I recall, at this time Sephiroth hadn't actually called Meteor yet. Perhaps if Cloud had explained that to Aeris, they could have gone on to the Northern Crater by now, but I guess he didn't think of that. Cloud seems so transfixed on avoiding what's going to happen he does't seem to be looking for alternatives. Even with a second chance he's making mistakes, just well-educated ones.

Well, an excellent story. I'll be looking forward to how you wrap this up, assuming the next chapter is the last.

OMG! a cliff hanger! xD you meany! D; This story is one of the best i've read yet. This is such a great re-write! :3 i hope Aerith and Cloud will get a happy ending! n.n

Update soon! :3

This is really interesting...

Love the Cloud/Aerith ness, and the kiss last chapter.

This is really cute, too!

Argh, you are cruel. :( Leaving such a cliffhanger! Can't form... complete sentences...

Seriously now, I just found this story... and wow. Wow, wow, wow.

The tension is getting crazy, and for once, I honestly have no idea what is going to happen next.

I must say though, with all the fluff in the begining, the way this story is going feels like the rug has been pulled out from under me... chapter by chapter. :)

Part of me wants the bad stuff to happen... but the other part is screaming "NO NO NO! SHE BETTER NOT DIE AGAIN!"

Anyway, can you please update? I'll give you a cookie. Really I will. I'm holding it now as we speak. *holds up cookie*

I really like your story :D . You write Cloud's angsty inner turmoil really well. Looking forward to more!

Perfect. Aerith is guarded perfectly... please, don't just pop in a plot hole.

Hi there! I’ve just read all eight chapters and my goodness, what a story this has turned out to be! I admit, I was getting a little drowned in fluff before the plot twist came, but you still had me hooked on your story, and I’m entranced at how you’ve spun it. I like the other-worldly air that Cloud has in this. Sometimes, I got annoyed by his near-obsession with Aerith’s protection but I suppose that is kind of the point- after all he’s already lost her once! Oh, and I like how you twisted the whole black materia event with Vincent stepping in for Cloud. And you are particularly skilled at weaving angst and conflict, did you know that? Well, if not, I’m telling you now! :p I also love your “I”, “you” point of view in the later chapters .
The build-up of suspense in this latest chapter is just amazing. I’m holding my breath!