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Jane 2008-06-30 ch 2, anon.	abuseI like your writing style overall. One suggestion- personally it's a big pet peeve of mine when stories refer to Brennan as "Temperance" because that name is so rarely used on the show that it is awkward and distracting to see here. "Brennan" also seems much more in character - even her best friend calls her by her last name in the actual series. Kind of like "Mulder and Scully"- the last names just work better.
Amasayda 2008-04-12 ch 1,	abuseHey! I've just finished your story and have to tell you how wonderful it has been. Thank you so much for sharing your idea with us. I totally loved your writing and the plot and was especially touched by the showdown, where Booth had to knock out Bones. This is definitely one of the best stories I have written around here ... you are just a talented writer and this story was all I ever want from a story: some fluff, a real case (and this one was cool), some humor and the rest of the squint squad around. Very well done ... this was worth reading! Kat
BBLove 2008-02-27 ch 27,	abuseThis is such an amazing story! Totally going on my favorites list :D
purebristles 2007-08-01 ch 27,	abuse"I think we'll just take yours," has to be the cutest line ever. Great work!
purebristles 2007-08-01 ch 3,	abuse“We’ll be working on deciphering the message if we can as well, but due to a backup of work, I’m afraid this one is more or less up to you and the good Doctor.” --> "backup" would read better as "backlog".
Katrina 2007-07-31 ch 27, anon.	abuseHey, This is the first review I've ever written, and I've read a lot of stories, but that was just amazing. Everything seemed so vivid and easy to picture,especially the dreams. Just thought you should know that! Keep writing! Thanks for the awesome afternoon.
EmEx 2007-06-22 ch 27,	abuseAgain, awesome story! you got me hooked and it's your fault I didn't finish my many duties at work! An interesting villain, a great plot, very well explored relationships and reactions, an awesome way too describe environments and situations and boy! Did the climax kept me thrilled!! Of course, the BBR was great and slow developing though I felt that Brennan's nightmares didn't reach for a conclusion. But over all, a very, very good fanfic.
HarpD 2007-06-20 ch 25, anon.	abusewonderful, wonderful story. You have a talent - and such unique plots!
starzstruck-1 2007-06-05 ch 27,	abuseCompletely fantastic. I read the entire thing i one sitting.
atruwriter 2007-05-17 ch 4,	abuse"...“Debra Grey. Went missing in July of last year. She was 32 years old.” Booth took a sip of his coffee as Temperance continued to scan the file. “Height fits the range you gave me, and face was almost a perfect match.” Temperance nodded as she looked at the photo of the woman attached to the file. The image showed Donna Grey..." Is the victim Donna or Debra, because you wrote both names not very far apart near the end of this chapter. Thought I'd let you know. Other than that, I'm really liking how this story is progressing so far. Much more mysterious than most others I've read and not anywhere near as predictable! So well done!
Micca 2007-05-11 ch 27,	abusewell done well developed and delivered plot with a very strong A plot case story line and wonderful character development. I have to say I started reading this before it was finished and stoped after the chapter when they first meet Ms Stone, short sighted on my part. I thought you might turn it in to a long lost real mother of Brennan thing. When I saw it was finished I tryed agian and I am very glad that I did. Good bag guys are hard to find and I did know it was her until quite late in the day. Might I suggest some non fan fic fiction Thanks Micca
saulalovin 2007-05-11 ch 27,	abuseI just came across this fic now, and I absolutely love it. You're a wonderful writer.
Lorelei of the Sea 2007-05-07 ch 5,	abuselol. Remainds me of the time my mom's bedroom flooded- she spent a month trying to sell me shoes at night.
nonnymouse 2007-04-22 ch 27, anon.	abuseOH. MY. GOSH. CUTEST THING EVER. The plot was amazing and everything was amazing. And the last chapter was just oh my god.
kappak 2007-04-20 ch 27, anon.	abusei just wanted to say that that was a perfect ending to your amazing story! love the way you captured the relationships between the characters, and had a great plot too! keep on writing!

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