Very nicely done! I love the way you write Alan and Denny's relationship. You've definitely got the character voices down!

Oh, my, this is good. Subtle, that's the word. The dialogue was so smooth, flowing, really. And is that a faint whiff of slash I smell? Delicious.

Ooh yay, I love the boston legal fanfics. Please keep writing, no on eelse seems to write Boston legal as much as you, and I can't think of anything good to write about.

Uh this fic is good in a wierd kind of way.