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| Tsuki Fox 2006-09-21 ch 1, | abuseoh jeebus...poor satoshi |
| Xx Heartless xX 2006-07-27 ch 1, | abuseWow... that was just... wow... That was just wonderful! I was really absorbed in the story--it was fantastic! I love the idea--really original. As I was reading (before it happened), I suddenly thought, "Wait! He's gonna make her have Sato? So he'll be Sato's dad?"--and then it happened! I truly enjoyed this story, and hope to read more from you. I'm putting it in my favs, and I'm telling my friends... so... yeah. Keep up the good work! |
| Vera 2006-07-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow... Very twitchy-creepy. I like it. |
| Bowleena 2006-07-10 ch 1, | abuseWow... it makes so much... sense! Great story! :) To my favorites this story goes! (Wow, Yoda speech...) Yay for blue popsicles, -Bowleena |
| Split Persona 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abuseOoh, I've never read the mabga, so i don't know if this has any canonical basis, but that doesn't mean that I don't find it deliciously intriguing. The premise that KRAD created Satoshi is a little 'sick' but in a good way that makes you quiver and good 'Oh.' Which is kinda what most things dealing with Krad are like. I don't think you're supposed to like a guy you're obviously meant to hate so much, but I don't care. And the way you wrote Krad was absolutely fabulous. So very much him. And poor Satoshi. You also created another very interesting premise, in the ritual that breaks the seal on Daiki and brings Dark back. Something that could definitely be used in either a sequel, or another story from the same 'timeline'. Bravo. |