well written and action packed so far

Oki, I read both stories and man you can write action. I am just glad that you did not kill the main characters. great work.

Wow what a ride...thanks for the great read and as usual you didn't disappoint. See ya out there.

Your fan,

Sherryw

i really like this story and its about time we finished it. can't wait for you next story.

this was a realy good story I enjoyed it form beginning to end, it was just as good as crimson puddles, looking forwad to other chapters from OOHW, and some other stories!

Another great chapter. I like how you show each character's thoughts and feelings. Keep it up =) Hope you can update soon.

great chapter and really looking forward to the next one!

to the person who wrote "beautiful mess" GREAT JOB!! i will say, a bit overdramatic, but this would have made a great episode! Every character was dead-on and chapter 2 when nick is talking to catherine, it was like i could hear them. your writing captured their soul! Please write more! i love this web site and all i have been doing for the last two weeks is reading csi fan fiction. I intend on reading more!! Thanks for the story!!

great chapter, i am glad the are all going to be okay and i love the additonal people to add to thier family, looking forward to the next chapter!

Great chapter, please continue soon.

Another great chapie. Looking forward to more. Update soon!@

This was a good chapter. I like this story.

I was biting my nails throughout this whole chapter. Lots of action. Looking forward to more. Update soon!

thiswas a really great chapter, love the nicky angst and looking forward to the next chapter!

Absolutly amazing. This was such a great chapter, I read it three times. You describe everything so well I can clearly picture it. There is no better way to describe Nick and Warrick's friendship than the way you do. Great job, hope you can update very soon.