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| sernity1806 2008-01-11 ch 15,  | abuseOki, I read both stories and man you can write action. I am just glad that you did not kill the main characters. great work. |
| sherryw 2006-11-13 ch 15, | abuseWow what a ride...thanks for the great read and as usual you didn't disappoint. See ya out there. Your fan, Sherryw |
| snowangel-983 2006-11-09 ch 15, | abusei really like this story and its about time we finished it. can't wait for you next story. |
| wraiths-angel 2006-11-07 ch 15, | abusethis was a realy good story I enjoyed it form beginning to end, it was just as good as crimson puddles, looking forwad to other chapters from OOHW, and some other stories! |
| twenty3 2006-10-17 ch 14, | abuseAnother great chapter. I like how you show each character's thoughts and feelings. Keep it up =) Hope you can update soon. |
| wraiths-angel 2006-10-17 ch 14, | abusegreat chapter and really looking forward to the next one! |
| san 2006-09-24 ch 13, anon. | abuseto the person who wrote "beautiful mess" GREAT JOB!! i will say, a bit overdramatic, but this would have made a great episode! Every character was dead-on and chapter 2 when nick is talking to catherine, it was like i could hear them. your writing captured their soul! Please write more! i love this web site and all i have been doing for the last two weeks is reading csi fan fiction. I intend on reading more!! Thanks for the story!! |
| wraiths-angel 2006-09-24 ch 13, | abusegreat chapter, i am glad the are all going to be okay and i love the additonal people to add to thier family, looking forward to the next chapter! |
| TangledPencils 2006-09-23 ch 13, | abuseGreat chapter, please continue soon. |
| sherryw 2006-09-23 ch 13, | abuseAnother great chapie. Looking forward to more. Update soon!@ |
| mtee1958 2006-09-18 ch 12, | abuseThis was a good chapter. I like this story. |
| sherryw 2006-09-17 ch 12, | abuseI was biting my nails throughout this whole chapter. Lots of action. Looking forward to more. Update soon! |
| wraiths-angel 2006-09-17 ch 12, | abusethiswas a really great chapter, love the nicky angst and looking forward to the next chapter! |
| twenty3 2006-09-16 ch 12, | abuseAbsolutly amazing. This was such a great chapter, I read it three times. You describe everything so well I can clearly picture it. There is no better way to describe Nick and Warrick's friendship than the way you do. Great job, hope you can update very soon. |
| TangledPencils 2006-09-16 ch 12, | abuseOh boy, action action everywhere, and it looks like the bad guys copped it good! There can't be too many of them left to sort out. Great chapter, please continue. |