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Pampers Baby Dry 2008-10-11 . chapter 6
Loved it! aw, was just so cute!
of wonderlands and alices. 2008-04-08 . chapter 6
my favorite part, how about all of it? xDD well i wouldn't be lying, that's for sure, but the part that i thought was the best was chapter four where lightning was asking doc out and stammering and jumping to conclusions and being a typical guy. it was endearing how much he cared and how disappointed he felt. and i loved how doc said yes, it sounded like something he would say. xD

the funniest parts were definitely in this last chapter!
[“I wish my ex-girlfriend wasn’t such a **.”] & [“Umm, I wish my enemy Chick Hicks would fall into a ditch?”] LMAO~

i loved the whole conversation with sally in the restaurant; it was hilarious. and you made me feel better about sally's character when she looked past her possible resentment of lightning for doc's happiness. sweet. ohmyiloveyourworksomuch!
Reality Obscured 2007-03-17 . chapter 6
This was actually quite good! My favorite part was easily the part when McQueen was asking Doc out on a date.
Escagirl 2006-12-26 . chapter 6
Awws! The SQUEE! You should totally write a sequel! ::coos more over story::
Esinololly 2006-12-21 . chapter 6
That was SO cute! Oh my GAWD XD I love it! *foam*
JC 87 2006-11-28 . chapter 6
*hugs* Wow this was good. :-D You are a very talented writer! I didn't think many others really like Doc/Lightning. You wrote their characters very well and I would like to see stories about these two from you :-)

Have any more ideas for this couple? ^_^ I can't wait to read more!

~Jenny~
BRR56 2006-10-07 . chapter 6
Hey- I'm not usually all that happy about these Sarge/Fillmore or Doc/Lightning stories, but this was the first I read all the way through and didn't get disgusted by. I'm trying to do a story where Chick Hicks falls in love, so reading love stories helps me a lot. But I really did honestly enjoy this story.

Kina Fett

"Keep writing- it's the best thing you can do."

Chick and Starfire Hicks
She-Elf4 2006-08-21 . chapter 3
A good story so far, but I'm worried about reading the next chapter. What will Doc's reaction be? How much of a fool will Lightning make of himself?
wo1f-mage 2006-08-03 . chapter 6
I absolutely loved your story. Very well written, and you did a good job at keeping the characters...in character. xD Hope to see more like this one!
If Wishes Were Blue Skies 2006-07-25 . chapter 6
aw, that was so incredibly sweet. you write those two so well, the whole chapter just put a smile on my face ^-^
Bob 2006-07-21 . chapter 5
Grr. I didn't know u finished it! Sorry. But please keep writing more of this story! PLEASE!
Bingley 2006-07-18 . chapter 6
I seriously loved it al. And the quick updates. I'm happy, now. :3
Bob 2006-07-18 . chapter 6
Update as FAST as u possibly can! I couldn't wait for this chapter! When I first read it it was already to chapter four and i kept checking on every day to see if u updated! The story is awesome! Keep up the good work!

P.S. I say this again, UPDATE AS FAST AS POSSIBLE!
Basil-Ovelby 2006-07-18 . chapter 5
What the heck?! is being SO STUPID and is irking me off!! What happened to my review? LOL ANYWAY...
Here's the rest of what I said (hopefully it actually WORKS this time... -_-;)
Cute cute cute! Very well-written, in-character, and cute story-line. I love it~! Can't wait to see more fics from you! =D
NAME AND ADDRESS WITHHELD 2006-07-18 . chapter 6
(bounces up and down) That. Was. GREAT! Ah I loved it! Too bad it's over. Oo, my favorite part... Probably Mater's speech thingy in the beginning. You managed to keep me entertained, and I am all for Sally and Lightning. It was an awesome fic! :D
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