 Pampers Baby Dry 2008-10-11 . chapter 6Loved it! aw, was just so cute! |
 of wonderlands and alices. 2008-04-08 . chapter 6my favorite part, how about all of it? xDD well i wouldn't be lying, that's for sure, but the part that i thought was the best was chapter four where lightning was asking doc out and stammering and jumping to conclusions and being a typical guy. it was endearing how much he cared and how disappointed he felt. and i loved how doc said yes, it sounded like something he would say. xD
the funniest parts were definitely in this last chapter!
[“I wish my ex-girlfriend wasn’t such a **.”] & [“Umm, I wish my enemy Chick Hicks would fall into a ditch?”] LMAO~
i loved the whole conversation with sally in the restaurant; it was hilarious. and you made me feel better about sally's character when she looked past her possible resentment of lightning for doc's happiness. sweet. ohmyiloveyourworksomuch! |
 Reality Obscured 2007-03-17 . chapter 6This was actually quite good! My favorite part was easily the part when McQueen was asking Doc out on a date. |
 Escagirl 2006-12-26 . chapter 6Awws! The SQUEE! You should totally write a sequel! ::coos more over story:: |
 Esinololly 2006-12-21 . chapter 6That was SO cute! Oh my GAWD XD I love it! *foam* |
 JC 87 2006-11-28 . chapter 6*hugs* Wow this was good. :-D You are a very talented writer! I didn't think many others really like Doc/Lightning. You wrote their characters very well and I would like to see stories about these two from you :-)
Have any more ideas for this couple? ^_^ I can't wait to read more!
~Jenny~ |
 BRR56 2006-10-07 . chapter 6Hey- I'm not usually all that happy about these Sarge/Fillmore or Doc/Lightning stories, but this was the first I read all the way through and didn't get disgusted by. I'm trying to do a story where Chick Hicks falls in love, so reading love stories helps me a lot. But I really did honestly enjoy this story.
Kina Fett
"Keep writing- it's the best thing you can do."
Chick and Starfire Hicks |
 She-Elf4 2006-08-21 . chapter 3A good story so far, but I'm worried about reading the next chapter. What will Doc's reaction be? How much of a fool will Lightning make of himself? |
 wo1f-mage 2006-08-03 . chapter 6I absolutely loved your story. Very well written, and you did a good job at keeping the characters...in character. xD Hope to see more like this one! |
 If Wishes Were Blue Skies 2006-07-25 . chapter 6aw, that was so incredibly sweet. you write those two so well, the whole chapter just put a smile on my face ^-^ |
 Bob 2006-07-21 . chapter 5 Grr. I didn't know u finished it! Sorry. But please keep writing more of this story! PLEASE! |
 Bingley 2006-07-18 . chapter 6I seriously loved it al. And the quick updates. I'm happy, now. :3 |
 Bob 2006-07-18 . chapter 6 Update as FAST as u possibly can! I couldn't wait for this chapter! When I first read it it was already to chapter four and i kept checking on every day to see if u updated! The story is awesome! Keep up the good work!
P.S. I say this again, UPDATE AS FAST AS POSSIBLE! |
 Basil-Ovelby 2006-07-18 . chapter 5What the heck?! is being SO STUPID and is irking me off!! What happened to my review? LOL ANYWAY...
Here's the rest of what I said (hopefully it actually WORKS this time... -_-;)
Cute cute cute! Very well-written, in-character, and cute story-line. I love it~! Can't wait to see more fics from you! =D |
 NAME AND ADDRESS WITHHELD 2006-07-18 . chapter 6(bounces up and down) That. Was. GREAT! Ah I loved it! Too bad it's over. Oo, my favorite part... Probably Mater's speech thingy in the beginning. You managed to keep me entertained, and I am all for Sally and Lightning. It was an awesome fic! :D |