 kaleidoscopicepic 2009-12-03 . chapter 8I truly enjoyed your rewording of the lines from Darcy's first proposal in P&P to fit this plot line!! This is a wonderful story, and I can't wait to hear more about this plot!! Please update or continue as soon as possible, and thanks lots and lots for writing! |
 Shadow Cat17 2009-10-02 . chapter 8I do hope you update soon! I really am enjoying this story! |
 Miss Ulv 2009-02-18 . chapter 8Great story thus far :D
I really hope you update soon! |
 Reshmi Solaris 2009-01-19 . chapter 8That was a delightful chapter! I really like this story so far! Could you please update soon? I am eager to discover what happens next =) |
 Reshmi Solaris 2009-01-19 . chapter 4This is entirely amusing! =) |
 Reshmi Solaris 2009-01-19 . chapter 1This is rather interesting... I like it thus far! |
 scrimshaw 2008-10-06 . chapter 8I had read this story some time ago, before creating an account, and now feel obliged on rereading it to offer my words of congratulations on such a believable AU. I greatly enjoyed your depictions of the characters (though I disagree with you slightly over Mr. Bingley, I'm afraid, even if I appreciate why you feel that way). The tone and style of your story had me laughing aloud, as your witticisms and depictions were pure Austenian, with subtle twists and a depiction of the romance that did not have me turn from the page in embarrasment (as many do) but actually enjoying its progression. I encourage you to write more in this story at any future date that you have the opportunity to. |
 IcelandGirl812 2008-07-05 . chapter 8This is GREAT!! I love all the differences and new stuff you put in it! It's been awhile since you updated, but I'm hoping you haven't abandoned this and will soon update...I stress 'soon'! =D |
 skyisthelimit 2008-04-10 . chapter 8Hi, I don't know if I've reviewed your stories before, but I have been reading most of your Pride and Prejudice, including an Honourable Provisin and The Season of Courtship.
I must say that I enjoy your writing. You fully grasp Jane Austen's writing style, as well as the traditions and rules of the Regency era in England. You also have great ideas. I love your different takes on the Darcy family and such also.
Your stories are very good, I repeat, and I should really like it if you continue them, particularly this story, in which I'm technically reviewing, Such Terms of Cordiality. I'm also looking foward to you updates on An Honourable Provision.
Please update soon! |
 FreeDaChickens 2008-04-06 . chapter 8I love this! You do an excellent job of writing in Austen's style; unlike some others I have read, the story and dialogue flows very naturally. I also loved how you inserted some of the dialogue from the book into this, twisting the words only a little to have them fit. Very funny.
I'm really interested in knowing not only what happens between Elizabeth and Darcy but Jane and Bingley. I was a little surprised on how you interpreted that -- I always assumed that Jane liked Bingley but showed very little of her preference. Anyway, this is a fascinating story and I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
 Failing Mentality 2008-02-09 . chapter 8This is the singularly most wonderful story I've read. In Borders, there were other books which were re-tellings or continuations of Pride and Prejudice, however I was uninterested in them. Your summary captured my curiosity, and now I'm hooked! |
 Bhavana 2008-02-01 . chapter 8 I think I feel another obsession coming on...I've taken to reading your stories one by one, and there's certainly nothing wanting...I'm very interested in this story, and am starting to feel almost sorry for Elizabeth...Darcy and his family aren't going to accept and love her as..well, unconditionally as he does by the end of Pride and Prejudice, so I'm really looking forward to seeing this couple's journey. Lady Anne...is she more in favour of this alliance simply because Elizabeth is Mr Bennet's daughter? I wonder if she will become a problem later...
AUs are always a welcome change, and I've always admired your characterisation...sure, the characters may not do the the things they did in JA's canon, but if they did, it would be pretty much as you've written it. Seeing as I'm following quite a few of your fics now, any update is VERY welcome...but I have to give in and say...OMG PLEASE UPDATE THIS ONE QUICKLY! (November of last year?!) |
 AzaleaDatura 2008-01-31 . chapter 8Please, please, please update soon. I absolutly adore this story. I love it. Ramona-Theta |
 SweetMiyu 2008-01-21 . chapter 8Wow!! I was wonderful!...
The characters come to life so naturally, and the plot is so plausibly that I can not wait for more!!1
Please! |
 . 2008-01-05 . chapter 8 Umph... Are U still here? Anything new? Will this novel (and others...) be finished? |