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| For the 19th Time 2007-03-12 ch 1, | abuse((falls over)) C-could you seperate the paragraphs the size of Alaska, please? I'm not trying to be mean, but those things are a pain in the @$$ to read. I like the storyline. Your grammer and spelling is good, too, but those dang Alaska paragraphs... -Mew Sakuranbo- |
| AshK 2006-10-08 ch 2, | abuseGood work with changing it so Crystal is the Daughter of Ash and Misty just like in Crystal Ketchum: A New Generation Begins. Anyway great work woth this story. Sincerely, AshK |
| Dragon Cruzer 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abuseUm, The mallet comes from a thing called hammerspace. Go 2 and type it in 2 learn more |
| Blackpelt 2006-07-03 ch 2, | abuseme:here i am! aireon:we love this story! tiffie:yeah it rox! alexandra(alex):this is a cute story! me:i am an umbreon, Aireon is the flying eeveelution,tiffie is a typhlosion and alex is a cyndaquil!bye for now! |
| Blackpelt 2006-07-03 ch 1, | abuseme:i love this story so far!!oh, but you said it was pika-ish, but it is pikanese.i shall now read the epilouge! |
| Lord Stingdingdingdingdingw... 2006-07-03 ch 1, | abuseI like this story! Also you'll be happy to know that in the battle frontier region of pokemon, team rocket changes it's motto! (It has more of meowth in it!) |