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For the 19th Time
2007-03-12
ch 1,
abuse((falls over)) C-could you seperate the paragraphs the size of Alaska, please? I'm not trying to be mean, but those things are a pain in the @$$ to read.
I like the storyline. Your grammer and spelling is good, too, but those dang Alaska paragraphs...

-Mew Sakuranbo-
AshK
2006-10-08
ch 2,
abuseGood work with changing it so Crystal is the Daughter of Ash and Misty just like in Crystal Ketchum: A New Generation Begins. Anyway great work woth this story.

Sincerely,
AshK
Dragon Cruzer
2006-10-07
ch 1,
abuseUm,
The mallet comes from a thing called hammerspace.
Go 2 and type it in 2 learn more
Blackpelt
2006-07-03
ch 2,
abuseme:here i am!
aireon:we love this story!
tiffie:yeah it rox!
alexandra(alex):this is a cute story!
me:i am an umbreon, Aireon is the flying eeveelution,tiffie is a typhlosion and alex is a cyndaquil!bye for now!
Blackpelt
2006-07-03
ch 1,
abuseme:i love this story so far!!oh, but you said it was pika-ish, but it is pikanese.i shall now read the epilouge!
Lord Stingdingdingdingdingw...
2006-07-03
ch 1,
abuseI like this story! Also you'll be happy to know that in the battle frontier region of pokemon, team rocket changes it's motto! (It has more of meowth in it!)
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