Points for you for using one of my favorite phrases ever: Holy shit I'm on fire! XD It can be used in so many situations... and it's funny every time! Gibari "worsening" the situation was funny, too. Chocolate sauce is always great. :)

Ahahaha! Gibari waking up had me laughing from the start. Yay fan-girlism! It is truly a condition. XD Poor Kalas... but Faye's right: it is hot! I can't wait to read more.

Ahaha, funny.
Is there going to a sequel to this? You know, when Kalas betrays the party? Because that would be interesting.
Later.

This chapter made me laugh my ass off! It was hilarious! the funniest thing I've read in forever!
Love it!

Ahaha, Kalas getting Lyude drunk, NICE.

Neat chapter.
I liked it.
Hope you update soon

Wow. Just...wow.
Kalas and Lyude...wow.
As much as I hate the pairing-and I really, really do-this was really good...just kinda...wow.
Keep writing, though! As awkward as some of those parts made me feel...I want to read more...strange, huh?
And the Guardian Spirit was so funny!
And, once again...wow.

okay, yeah. i never told you but this is my TOTAL FAVEORITE story by you, and also on the site, so far. not that i read much. >__< anyway... it's awesome. you've made me like all the characters a little bit more. and yes, i'm fangirling all over this piece. superb!

Soyo: I loved it!! You gonna do more? I'd like that.
Sayo: *Nod*

funny and cute at the same time! my favorite part was with the crystal spider "it stood motionless;it's one eye twitching" i also liked the part with "I bet you could haul a sh*tload of fish with this thing!" I played baten kaitos the eternal ocean, but I'm not far, I couldn't find that spider web or something that that boy wanted so he'd show me how to get in the palace. could you tell me how to get one?

..LOL! Gibari and Savyna were so funny!...And you actually made me LIKE Mizuti! Really cool fic, fun to read!^^

omg... first Baton Kaitos ff... wow... agh! I'll never be able to look at the lovely Lyude the same again... wait... YES I WILL. Awsome... definatly... er... yeah... Kalas, Lyude... I have a weird sick feeling at the pit of my stomach but at the very same time... this wonderous curiosity of where the story will go from here and impatiantly await your next chapter.

~Kali

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!...loved it!

YAY!! OMG! I loved the ending! XD Lyude and Kalas are HOT together. Oh yeah. Hehe, I enjoyed this story alot, thanks for completing it so quickly!! I hope you continue to write!

WhyDee
aka
YD

Cool story, can't wait for more chapters