*low whistle

deep.

Holy Crap that was good!

A wonderful one-shot!

ouch... sweet and spicy

wow! great story! it's very different compared to the other stories I've read. the lemon part was decent-not too dirty or anything. You did wel in telling thins story in a different view. _

Beautiful. Tragic. Perfect Mixture.

beautiful. so very beautiful and tragic. you have such a wonderful way with words and its obvious in this story that they mean so much to you! :D excellent job!

perfectly realistic and beautiful, especially the ending.

Keep it up and make a sequel! -

aw..it's so bittersweet. I loved reading it. XD

Ooh, I liked it. Will you write a complimentary oneshot to this? I sure hope you do... _

Awesome job! A very short one-shot but so well developed that it was the perfect size _

Love you're fanfic! But the ending was kinda disappointing... Can you make a sequel? Pretty PLEASE! You're story wsa really... really... really... Oh God! I don't know what to call it! It might be an understatement of what I think... How 'bout this... SUPER,MEGA,WONDERFUL,INTRIGUING,COOL,NICE,SWEET,HE ARTWARMING and all the good adjectives in the world! YOU ROCK! KEEP ON ROCKING!

It was Eriol wasn't it? i hope so. well, very intense story. love it. can't wait to read more. thank you so very much!

You know, you could've made this as a full-story coz, DAMN!

I love these kind of stories y'know. But, hey it's great. Simple and straight. Still, hope you'll update your other stories. Keep up the good work!

An exquisite work! The simple, but yet alluring, title already gives you an idea of a story situated in a urban location. It prepares the reader to a street story. Sort of cliche, a beautiful woman selling her body, a boy falling in love with her, the conflict of love, pleasure, power and human flaw. But yet, you can pinch it and make it yours. It is original in its own way. I am actually expecting another chapter.

Aww...that's sad...but cute. It's wonderful!