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GundamWingFanatic90
2009-03-09 . chapter 12
Wow, so I'm not the only one who knows about the Doom movie? It's a miracle. You know, I had a very similar idea, actually. It involved John Grimm and flying. o.O Great story!
acacia59601
2009-01-23 . chapter 20
This story was amazing, I'm very impressed!
KrisEleven
2008-11-15 . chapter 20
Very good. I really enjoyed the happy ending this provided. You are an excellent writer, and I hope you keep it up!

KrisEleven~
KrisEleven
2008-11-15 . chapter 13
I love the conversation between Clark and his mother. It was so cute.

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KrisEleven
2008-11-15 . chapter 11
Aw! I love it! This is really well done: excellent use of the cliffhanger in the last chapter!

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KrisEleven
2008-11-15 . chapter 5
This is very cool. I don't know anything of the canon apart from the movies, so I'm enjoying this as a new story. Hopefully, I'm not missing out on too much backstory. You're doing a great job with the characters.

KrisEleven~
KrisEleven
2008-11-15 . chapter 2
This is really interesting. I like how your write: theres absolutely no mistakes in structure, spelling or grammer, which is a treat.

KrisEleven~
Myxale
2008-04-03 . chapter 20
This was a great ride! I enjoyed every minute i spent reading this in one sitting.

You had a real decent way with the characters and you kept them true from start to end! I loved how you handled Richard! With enough respect and care. I don't like when they get rid of him to soon or make him overly persistent.

You got the vibe between Kent and Lane well and i saw the romance progressing evenly and logically. Great use of Jason and Bruce!

Love how you made Lois find out about the secret and kept her using it to see Clark in a different light with the information!

This story had more great moments than I can list right now...but i hope you will be happy with "Thank you for sharing"

This is a instant fav.

Kudos and cheers!
Sakura Lucy Li
2008-01-02 . chapter 20
It was a pleasure to read!
Sometimes I am afraid of long stories in other languages, but you manage to make me fall in love with it!
When I started reading it, all the chapters had been beta-readed, so I didn't see any of the problems that you said... It must be wonderful to have a beta so good writer like you have!
I will be checking yours fanfictions now and then...

Good luck and a LOT of inspiration to you!
Sakura Lucy Li
2008-01-01 . chapter 11
Someday I really want to find how do you manage to write so many good things!

I am really loving this fic and the way you build the relations. Martha, Lois , Bruce, Jason, all of them looks like what they would do near clark! And, of course, your Clark/Superman has a deep feeling of real!
All of it is good, but so far this is my favorite chapter! I will fav this fanfiction now!
Wolvmbm
2007-11-13 . chapter 12
I must admit that I'm enjoy this story so far, and seeing "Batman" out of costume seems a little strange at first but okay overall. As it seems that Bruce Wayne plays a great supporting role in this story.

Also nice reference to the Earth-2 Helena Wayne, who is the daughter of Batman and Catwoman. I really enjoyed that because I'm a bit of a fan of the Earth-2 Batman, due to the fact that he got the "happy ending" before his untimely death.

I can almost see what would occur if Helena Wayne ever met up with Jason, it the next generation of the World's finest. :D

Now that is a story for future references. :D

All together this story seems great so far as I can't wait for more. :D
Cali
2007-10-06 . chapter 2
^^ Sullivan Lane!! Love the name. When it comes to the Smallville superman 'verse i prefer Chlark stories but when it comes to every other superman 'verse i go for Clois. Love the story.
Jen
2007-09-11 . chapter 20
Absolutely loved this story!
SongoftheDarquePhoenix
2007-05-26 . chapter 20
Awe ^^
And even Richard gets a happy ending!
Rhyssia
2007-05-14 . chapter 9
Just out of curiousity, are you basing Pete Ross off Smallville, the comic, or something else, as in Smallville I thought he was a black kid. ;)
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