Reviews for On Glass Wings

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Sora's Long Lost Lover 2008-05-22 ch 3,	abuseyay Roxy! o gosh, Rikus mind never ceases to amaze me! How could he think to leave So-chan out in the middle of the rain! Poor Nami, tho, I wonder what her story is... (?) And what did Xemnas say that has Sora panicky?
Sora's Long Lost Lover 2008-05-22 ch 2,	abuseHAHAHA!! yay Axel! he rox my socks! speaking of which, where is Roxas and Zexy?
Sora's Long Lost Lover 2008-05-22 ch 1,	abusehaha, aw that sucks for sora! now im off to the second chapter! hey, what happened to The Paopu Predicament?
siara_faerie@hotmail.com 2008-05-01 ch 20, anon.	abuseplease write some more its a really good story! ^^
-siarafaerie-101-miss 2008-04-24 ch 53,	abusethis is a totally wicked story! please write more
KazumaKyu 2008-02-25 ch 31,	abuseI love this story! One of the best Riku/Sora fics I have ever had the pleasure to read. Truly worth of the title 'Epic'. There are, however, a few things that befuddle and confuse me: It seems to me that everyone has their priorities a little skewed. It seems as if people are more concerned about the welfare of the company than of poor little Sora. This has become quite the aggravating issue for me. It would seem that a company would not be that difficult to rebuild- especially considering those who are in it; much more so than trying to rebuild a small boy's mental sanity. But, whatever, maybe I'm just too much of a romantic; 'love triumphs over bacon' and all that rubbish. My petty woes aside, I find this to be quite the acceptional fic and look forward to reading more of your work. -KazumaKyu
EternalSketches 2008-01-23 ch 53,	abuseyay! part three! didnt think it'd come so fast!(laughs at self) I really liked OGW1 id have to say-the conflict and everything was amazing, and truthfully, hopefully in a constructive way^^;, i think it shouldve ended that way. It wouldve been a nice ending-happy and such, but still makes you wonder. yes build up the hype-yes just like cloverfield, whatta bust- and once people are BEGGING you, you continue with an amazingly awesome sequel. Amazingly you managed to do pretty well on most, sans my sadist suggestion to prolong it, but the whole'them fighting' kinda irked me. After all thats happened i was hoping theyd be a little more open with eachother and hopefully, build off eachother, being as theyre one another's significant other, and as sappy as i sound.__. i kinda wanted sora to help confort /riku/ with his past, and his apparent detrement towards weaness and his missing sora. I also dont know what it is with seph's vioce and whatnot in sora's head, but i just hope he doesnt go crazy-which i doubt-but i just hope you arent throwing things out there without knowing fully where you're going^^ ive seen it before and its a fate too saddening for me to not hopefully prevent:P WOW melodramatic much. ANYways im glad youve kept this LONG and seriously awesome story going for so long. As i mustve said a million times-I LOVE your sora, although it'd be nice if he just were a little less stubborn-same f=goes for riku, but its also that edge-mainly his determination and also his good hearted tenacity to be better than him-that i also love. He's gotten kinda crazy though. I dont think sora's stupid, actually he seems more like the type to take in perspective and think things outside the box and stuff like that. Yea so, if youre still there^^;; i hope you continue, and also that you dont go wrong with the conflictsOo id luv to see them finally become that stereotypical pairing ive come to loveXD just kidding, but yea id like to see them actually /love/ eachother some time soon^^
EternalSketches 2008-01-22 ch 43,	abuselol-nice sequel going. i had second thoughts as to wether a sequel would be good, but youve brought up a lot of good things to work off-also being Riku's annoying hatred towards sora's dpendency...even if he's equally as hopeless in that category.\ Hopefully youll get this sorted out-it IS something i thought seemed sorta amiss before, but im sure youll do great. Just hope this isnt to HUGE a project-i mean-fifty chapters and only half done? O_O i admire your zealxD just like sora! Hugs a sora plushie-for you!♥
EternalSketches 2008-01-21 ch 40,	abuseHa! Thats an incredibly sad yet somewat hopeful ending! The whole bit with kingdom hearts was awesome, i was enticed with the way you wrote it up, especially that scene with sephiroth:D i wouldve liked it if sora couldve decked seph in the face and he weere to fall off, but then the police prob wouldve been all over his case:S ah well, he died and it was good, even if you didnt commit an entire chapter to it-after all he wasnt the /main/ bad guy right? Speaking of which-This story has reached my all tije top 5 ( a difficult list belive me) with that tense scene with riku(geting kidnapped) and sora saving him. Youve got a knack for keeping us lowly readers on the ege of our seats(or swivley chair) i nearly fell outa mine from the sheer craziness. There was a scene where i noticed sora has a cross on his chest while Xehanort was about to take his heart-how coincidental-and i the way you made Hollow bastion was also sweet, a secluded town cut off from technology and ravished by a heart obsessed mad man. Although i truly loved the lime and the fluffy, cavity inducing scenes with sora and riku in CH39, i felt my heart kinda clech when riku just started to ignore him. I hope he realizes this mistake, and sora hopefully gets better-and they both get a lil less hardheaded about everything! lol but thnx for this first part it was amazing, like i always thought it would be xP
EternalSketches 2008-01-17 ch 31,	abuseXD i had to luagh when i read Naminé call sora hot! i could only imagine what was running through R iku's mind. someting along the lines of 'I totally agreemakes out with sora' anyways. that was quite a chapter-so much going on, its amazing that Xehanort and Seph would risk so much-just being seen could elicite an investigation, especially with sora around right? well i guess not if sora's being a wuss and all=__=. hopefully he'll reach finally reach the breaking point and get them all imprisoned for life.:D unfortunately i cant read as much as i did yesterday(O_O) final coming up and whatnot, but i will stay tuned..keep it up!^^
EternalSketches 2008-01-16 ch 23,	abuseAww-im sorry about the hasrsh pms. I agree that seems completely uncalled for. I actually dont mind the seph/sora, but i agree in the fact that im really leaning towars soriku^^ i mean-although i lovelovelove his character0-there are times i just wish he could l;ighten up a little, give riku a chance-and riku!(points accusingly towards him) he could be a little nicer if he wants to get with sora so badly-but aside from that i must tell you-unless ive already-i truely love the plot and your brilliant way of writing. A lil kiss **, but its true. I never bother reading pointless sccmutty crap fics. Ouch. but yours is not. I just /HOPE/ that sora and riku get together, somewhere in these 53 chaptersO_O..but i love ur moderate chapter lenghths. its good combined with so many chapters-anyways thnx for this I adore your story;) P34C3
EternalSketches 2008-01-15 ch 13,	abuseGuess i shouldve reviewed a lil more often than this huh?^^ Hehe, well, after finishing chapter 5, the internet just suddeny goes out(O_O) and im frustrated outta my mind cuz we /just/ payed this guy to fix it so now im **. Finally my mom finds this cord, that like came outta nowhere and it works-so it takes all my willpower to stop myself from reading even /further/ cuz im so glad-probably doesnt suffice, but yea i /do/ really like this story so far. i love sora-hes gutsy and strong(hearted i mean), even if sometimes i ust wish he'd let riku baby him a lil. but i cant blame him since rikus being sucha jerk about everything, thoug we all know its just his way of saying he likes him^/^ and you write all teh seperate characters so well, and the whole plot-im a sucker for these abuse stories:O anyways-great great great story(eerr so far) unfortunately becuase of school, schedule, and pissy parents i cant afford to read this late. Ever again. and omg-this is so huge, and ur barely 1/3 of the way done?? i do hope youre still writing-cuz ur skilled, but hopefully this isnt too ig a project^^; btw One little question-if you read this^^-what are sora and riku's ages in this? sora acts pretty immature, then again so does riku. so im guessing they're both just young hormonal teens?
EternalSketches 2008-01-15 ch 1,	abusei really like this first chapter here! cant believe ive never read this before! i like the wasy you started off really. So /far/ sora isnt the typical weak girly boy that practically /everyone/ makes him out to be. hes got some guts and for that you get serious props. and riku has me wondering also...^^
Vaed 2008-01-10 ch 46,	abuseAh, where do I start. I owe alot, I put this story on hold cause of my busy schedule, but now I remember why I was so obsessed with it 2 years ago. Reopening the story I skipped right to this chapter as I had recognized the name, the last chapter I was reading. Though everything is still sketchy, I still remember the general gist of it, and it's part of what makes this such a great story; it's memorable. If there's one thing that you deeply excel at, it's making an individual out of every character in this story. You're good at maintaining consistency, and it makes this story extremely professional. You're EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT about keeping your artist integrity in the everchanging characteristics/personalities of ALL your characters. The fact that the very sequel to this great story was generated from a minor character who appeared once or twice shows a great deal of premeditation and organization I find lacking in many fictions. It should come to no surprise to you that I find the Sora and Riku relationship the most intense, abstract though impossibly strong connection I've seen in any fiction. You make them a pairing without using what I call the cupid arrow, AKA once two characters pair up, they stay lovey-dovey even with the most atrocious things happening. This is more reference to your EXCELLENT artist integrity. The relationship is so sour yet so sweet at the same time the intricacy and intimacy is so phenomenal that it's invigorating to think about. It's as if not even the author knows how their relationship works, but the Riku and Sora themselves, making it extraordinarily fun to watch, as well as keeping me on my toes. There's another thing I notice that I've only told one other person about; the life of the characters. Many many times i'm disappointed by the fact that many characters in fictions have half-assed souls. Meaning, they have the stereotypical souls, aka Sora being the submissive, innocent, shy though playful, clumsy uke while Riku being the indestructible, million-muscle seme with an attitude. These types of souls can have many different names in different fandoms but they all mean the same. You may borrow some of these attributes, but they are not at all as exaggerated as the "soulless" ones I refer to. They seem like real people, and THAT, again, is artist's integrity. The Sora and Riku in your story are unique; you've created your own version. There is no replica of these two that i've seen in any fiction, and I must say, that out of all the fictions I've read (ALOT of them), these are the most realistic personalities I've seen if Riku and Sora in Kingdom Hearts, Nomura's own creation was put into the circumstances of your story. Congratulations, you've made an AU fic that's actually true to it's word, and believe me when I say there are FEW, I MEAN FEW out there that accomplish that, in favor of putting their HAWTEST COUPLES OMGZ together. Anyways, back to your integrity; As much as you might, in your heart, want these two to get back together again, you stay true to the status quo circumstances and their personalities and make them struggle through obstacles, and let me say this - it makes the cake at the end of the party ever more sweeter. I love you for that. The character's act on their own, even with the slap that Sora committed upon Olette, it's just more sense of the psychological breakdown that Sora is experiencing; change of character, growth of mind that will progress the story into something that can't be predicted. That's ANOTHER thing I love about Glass Wings, it's unpredictable. Faces change, masks break, all of the great characteristics about you intertwine with the sophisticated drama you've created to make one HELL of a plot. I still remember that rape scene with Sephiroth and Sora. You managed to pull off a never-done pairing VERY WELL WITHOUT making a half-assed attempt, on the contrary, it was worthy of a sadist. It wasn't just smut to be smut either, it had an GREAT impact on the plot, which shows more of your great premeditation combined with your excellent writing skills. I read your profile and saw that you felt that your writing skills were diminishing. I hope this revives some confidence in you, and believe me when I say I'm being extremely honest with this review. There's a reason why I PMed you times in the past, apologizing for not reviewing your newest chapter when I was busy. There are other aspects I can get into detail on, believe me. Your crossover of two stories which is SEEMLESS, your atmospheric tone, simple yet intricate diction, I can keep going on and on if I go read the story over again. I'm still amazed that this one chapter reminded me of all this goodness, this one FREAKING chapter. I'll have to go read the others now. Cheers. -Vaed
wha? 2008-01-01 ch 43, anon.	abuseOMG! your fanfic is just too cute! i like it the second part seems to be a bit lighter. i still think that sephy is about to pop out of nowhere and annoy everyone...^_^

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