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mylife9
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
excellent writing, but i had a bit of a problem understanding the last bit of it.
i understood that draco and harry got into a fight over a snake cho sent harry for valentine's day and the fact hat draco sent it back without consulting harry first. there was a three week break from each other before everyone got fed up with them and pushed the back together.
what i don't is the last section with the memory of, i think, harry when he was with cho? what memory modifications are we talking about? why was his memory tampered with? what do you mean by harry leaving all the time but always coming back?
once again, excellent writing, it's just the last part i didn't understand. :(
have a good day!
DeNiSaY60
2009-07-24 . chapter 1
Cute fanfiction :D I just love Lief and the twins
xxunrealisticxxdreamerxx
2008-08-11 . chapter 1
It was really good
Reyn
2008-06-15 . chapter 1
(serenades) Have I told~ you lately, that I love you~?

I'm giving out story recs to a friend, and happened to re-stumble across this. I don't know if I ever really thanked you properly for it...(showers you with her love) This oneshot is such an inspiration!! I need to work faster so I can finish up chapter 2 of the CoF sequel!! (heads back off to her notebook)

(but showers you with even more love first)
Reese
2008-03-12 . chapter 1
aw...poor Draco. how could harry ignore him for 3 weeks, especially over something so stupid; that's heartbreaking. very well written, though. would have been nice to see him (Harry) grovelling a bit more though.
anyway, nice fic, again. (and here's where i add the unwanted but shameless pleading to update your other fics) :)
Reyn
2007-12-06 . chapter 1
...I love you. All over again.
Kavitta
2007-09-21 . chapter 1
Wonderful one-shot... sound like it could be more but... LOL! LOved it!
DMLpacker
2007-05-24 . chapter 1
aw sweet story though Harry's memory modifications weren't really explained
Myra Amin
2007-02-07 . chapter 1
"Harry had come back, time and time again, but Draco also knew he would leave, time and time again. He still needed to seek reassurance within his children, within the four physical embodiments of Harry’s love for him. And time and time again, while he waited with bated breath and unshed tears, he would hold on to those four miracles that kept him from losing faith."

^ Aw! Draco was so sweet x_x!! I realy love the last part, the meaning is very deep! Very nice, keep up with the good work. I was actually in a very bad mood, but after reading this, with the cuteness of the story, it obviously cheered me up! *jumps* Hehe, so thank you! *grins*

Myra
john
2007-01-18 . chapter 1
very nice story.
Neko42
2007-01-16 . chapter 1
aw! that's so cool!
ScreamForSOH
2006-10-26 . chapter 1
lol that was a brilliant fic!! oh so very cute!



cya
squeak xoxo
thrnbrooke
2006-09-20 . chapter 1
Oh wow! I love it!
DMswissmissHG
2006-08-19 . chapter 1
LOL I
Ahja Reyn
2006-07-23 . chapter 1
well, its taken me forever and a day to leave a review, but at least I've finally gotten around to it.

As I said before, I love this story. The idea of Draco having a list cracks me up to no end and I'm completely blown away by how in-character you've managed to get everyone. The twins are completely devious, Lief's beyond adorable ("You wouldn’t like me ‘cause I’m stupider"), Gabe and co. exactly the way they do in CoF, and the lines you have everyone saying jest seem to give it all the perfect touch.

I'm so glad you wrote this! Thank you so much!
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