 mylife9 2009-11-01 . chapter 1excellent writing, but i had a bit of a problem understanding the last bit of it.
i understood that draco and harry got into a fight over a snake cho sent harry for valentine's day and the fact hat draco sent it back without consulting harry first. there was a three week break from each other before everyone got fed up with them and pushed the back together.
what i don't is the last section with the memory of, i think, harry when he was with cho? what memory modifications are we talking about? why was his memory tampered with? what do you mean by harry leaving all the time but always coming back?
once again, excellent writing, it's just the last part i didn't understand. :(
have a good day! |
 DeNiSaY60 2009-07-24 . chapter 1Cute fanfiction :D I just love Lief and the twins |
 xxunrealisticxxdreamerxx 2008-08-11 . chapter 1It was really good |
 Reyn 2008-06-15 . chapter 1 (serenades) Have I told~ you lately, that I love you~?
I'm giving out story recs to a friend, and happened to re-stumble across this. I don't know if I ever really thanked you properly for it...(showers you with her love) This oneshot is such an inspiration!! I need to work faster so I can finish up chapter 2 of the CoF sequel!! (heads back off to her notebook)
(but showers you with even more love first) |
 Reese 2008-03-12 . chapter 1 aw...poor Draco. how could harry ignore him for 3 weeks, especially over something so stupid; that's heartbreaking. very well written, though. would have been nice to see him (Harry) grovelling a bit more though.
anyway, nice fic, again. (and here's where i add the unwanted but shameless pleading to update your other fics) :) |
 Reyn 2007-12-06 . chapter 1 ...I love you. All over again. |
 Kavitta 2007-09-21 . chapter 1Wonderful one-shot... sound like it could be more but... LOL! LOved it! |
 DMLpacker 2007-05-24 . chapter 1aw sweet story though Harry's memory modifications weren't really explained |
 Myra Amin 2007-02-07 . chapter 1 "Harry had come back, time and time again, but Draco also knew he would leave, time and time again. He still needed to seek reassurance within his children, within the four physical embodiments of Harry’s love for him. And time and time again, while he waited with bated breath and unshed tears, he would hold on to those four miracles that kept him from losing faith."
^ Aw! Draco was so sweet x_x!! I realy love the last part, the meaning is very deep! Very nice, keep up with the good work. I was actually in a very bad mood, but after reading this, with the cuteness of the story, it obviously cheered me up! *jumps* Hehe, so thank you! *grins*
Myra |
 john 2007-01-18 . chapter 1 very nice story. |
 Neko42 2007-01-16 . chapter 1aw! that's so cool! |
 ScreamForSOH 2006-10-26 . chapter 1lol that was a brilliant fic!! oh so very cute!
cya
squeak xoxo |
 thrnbrooke 2006-09-20 . chapter 1Oh wow! I love it! |
 DMswissmissHG 2006-08-19 . chapter 1LOL I |
 Ahja Reyn 2006-07-23 . chapter 1well, its taken me forever and a day to leave a review, but at least I've finally gotten around to it.
As I said before, I love this story. The idea of Draco having a list cracks me up to no end and I'm completely blown away by how in-character you've managed to get everyone. The twins are completely devious, Lief's beyond adorable ("You wouldn’t like me ‘cause I’m stupider"), Gabe and co. exactly the way they do in CoF, and the lines you have everyone saying jest seem to give it all the perfect touch.
I'm so glad you wrote this! Thank you so much! |