 thebestestfriendsforever 2009-07-19 . chapter 1cute little sotry here. |
 KrisEleven 2008-11-15 . chapter 1Good story! I like how different the writing is in this one, versus the first Little Things, from Jason's POV. I was assuming when I watched the movie that it was not a sequel to the other movies. I think it 'picks up' from one of the comic/show/book storylines and goes from there, so Lois has no idea Clark is Superman.
Great characterization of Lois, and I love the emotion you show for Kent. Very sad, with the 'You should have a kid" line.
KrisEleven~ |
 Elliania 2007-07-18 . chapter 1Oh! Loved it!! Clark is just so adorable with Jason!! ^^ |
 bookworm97 2007-04-18 . chapter 1this was even cuter than the first one! i like this one even more! |
 GoldenRat 2006-11-07 . chapter 1Denial is the way humans cope. |
 Pyrebi 2006-09-30 . chapter 1Oh, I loved this part, too! The format (with paragraph breaks in the middle of sentences) wasn't as distracting as much as it was good at emphasising your points. I found myself nodding in total approval and happiness while reading.
Great little piece, and a joy to read. Thank you! |
 Sweet Irony 2006-08-14 . chapter 1I actually prefer the new Lois to the older one.
Anyway, adorable little story. I enjoyed reading it. :) |
 louiselane 2006-08-07 . chapter 1Aw, another great one especially the part with Clark and Jason playing together. Loved them saying "Swell" together. So damn cute. m:) |
 Tairona 2006-07-31 . chapter 1Oo! Another good one. I like this even better than the first. It was so poignant when Clark had that flash of pain pass across his eyes ... yeah, I know, dozens of fics have Clark with pain flashing through his eyes, but the way you wrote it, it struck me even more than usual. Maybe because it's juxtaposed with Lois completely not caring about him leaving. "You really should think about having a kid of your own, Clark." Ouch, an arrow through my (his) heart. Brilliantly done! |
 Slasher in the Rye 2006-07-22 . chapter 1okay, it's offical, I love your writing! |
 G.A. Clive 2006-07-20 . chapter 1so good! |
 IcyWaters 2006-07-18 . chapter 1Interesting story. When I left the theater after watching ‘Returns’, several questions were running through my head. Most were about Jason and what Lois did and did not remember. Hopefully, all will be answered in a sequel!
You did an admirable job of exploring Lois’s thoughts about her son without actually answering any of the big questions. I like how she begins to notice similarities between Jason and Clark. It left me wondering if that will be key to her figuring out Superman’s identity. This ends with so many possibilities to explore, yet is a very satisfying read. That’s not an easy task to accomplish! :-) |
 Fair-Ithil 2006-07-17 . chapter 1Stories like these make me want to slap Lois. Or at least pinch her. This is just overwhelmingly wonderful. Really, for a sith, you do good. |
 gunnman 2006-07-17 . chapter 1A wonderful story. I love how Lois notices that Clark and Jason look the same sometimes.
Gunn |
 ColtDancer 2006-07-13 . chapter 1OY, indeed. Let's drive that knife a little deeper into poor Clark's chest... ;) Nice one-shotters, here! Thanks for sharing. |