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thebestestfriendsforever
2009-07-19 . chapter 1
cute little sotry here.
KrisEleven
2008-11-15 . chapter 1
Good story! I like how different the writing is in this one, versus the first Little Things, from Jason's POV. I was assuming when I watched the movie that it was not a sequel to the other movies. I think it 'picks up' from one of the comic/show/book storylines and goes from there, so Lois has no idea Clark is Superman.

Great characterization of Lois, and I love the emotion you show for Kent. Very sad, with the 'You should have a kid" line.

KrisEleven~
Elliania
2007-07-18 . chapter 1
Oh! Loved it!! Clark is just so adorable with Jason!! ^^
bookworm97
2007-04-18 . chapter 1
this was even cuter than the first one! i like this one even more!
GoldenRat
2006-11-07 . chapter 1
Denial is the way humans cope.
Pyrebi
2006-09-30 . chapter 1
Oh, I loved this part, too! The format (with paragraph breaks in the middle of sentences) wasn't as distracting as much as it was good at emphasising your points. I found myself nodding in total approval and happiness while reading.

Great little piece, and a joy to read. Thank you!
Sweet Irony
2006-08-14 . chapter 1
I actually prefer the new Lois to the older one.

Anyway, adorable little story. I enjoyed reading it. :)
louiselane
2006-08-07 . chapter 1
Aw, another great one especially the part with Clark and Jason playing together. Loved them saying "Swell" together. So damn cute. m:)
Tairona
2006-07-31 . chapter 1
Oo! Another good one. I like this even better than the first. It was so poignant when Clark had that flash of pain pass across his eyes ... yeah, I know, dozens of fics have Clark with pain flashing through his eyes, but the way you wrote it, it struck me even more than usual. Maybe because it's juxtaposed with Lois completely not caring about him leaving. "You really should think about having a kid of your own, Clark." Ouch, an arrow through my (his) heart. Brilliantly done!
Slasher in the Rye
2006-07-22 . chapter 1
okay, it's offical, I love your writing!
G.A. Clive
2006-07-20 . chapter 1
so good!
IcyWaters
2006-07-18 . chapter 1
Interesting story. When I left the theater after watching ‘Returns’, several questions were running through my head. Most were about Jason and what Lois did and did not remember. Hopefully, all will be answered in a sequel!

You did an admirable job of exploring Lois’s thoughts about her son without actually answering any of the big questions. I like how she begins to notice similarities between Jason and Clark. It left me wondering if that will be key to her figuring out Superman’s identity. This ends with so many possibilities to explore, yet is a very satisfying read. That’s not an easy task to accomplish! :-)
Fair-Ithil
2006-07-17 . chapter 1
Stories like these make me want to slap Lois. Or at least pinch her. This is just overwhelmingly wonderful. Really, for a sith, you do good.
gunnman
2006-07-17 . chapter 1
A wonderful story. I love how Lois notices that Clark and Jason look the same sometimes.

Gunn
ColtDancer
2006-07-13 . chapter 1
OY, indeed. Let's drive that knife a little deeper into poor Clark's chest... ;) Nice one-shotters, here! Thanks for sharing.
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