read. kind of a meh story.

Original and well-written.

Hell, this was awesome. I don't know what the heck ur blubbering on about, grammar or some sort, but this was awesome. *am reading ur other stuff too.

I don't usually like H/Hr, and Ron is fun to hate. I do like H/Hr/G though. There is sadly little of that, though there are two fics of it on FanFicAuthors.

Added this story to my favorites. I liked the concept of future Dark!Harry coming back to warn his younger self. The line I loved most was "That I didn’t want to live if she wanted me dead."

Ah, I really liked this one. A blend of melancholy, a bit of darkness, a touch of tragedy, and a happy (for HHr) ending. Ah, if only there was a fic describing what happened as HHr rose to power... Please? With sugar on top?

The flawless elegance of this story is awe inspiring.
You truly have a natural writers talent.

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loved it, great job!

Love the idea of this fic, and I really do think it could continue to a full story. The crazy idea of ballance aside, I think this fic shines a light on a major problem in the HP world. Voldemort aside a lot of changes need to be made and most of them by force. All the parts that made Voldemort who he was are still in place, a Corrupt and pathetic form of goverment, mindless sheep of a society who believe a rag like the Daily prophet as if it was the gospel. Not to mention hogwarts, which ignores all it's problems and relies on tradition 300 + years old to set it's format. Infact things have only gotten worse, and they've taught less over the years then the intial founding. If the 'safest' place in england can have attacks pretty much every year of Harry's school life, how safe is it really? Not to mention the multitude of problems the school has with other area's.

Many changes need to be made with the goverment, the schools, and the way wizards simply live, and stuborn as they are it would have to be done by force. As such I see a fic like this really taking off, a some what grey/dark Harry setting up a new world order makes real sense.

great story

continue with the corruption its a goo story and i would like to read more.

Wow. Stunned. Too impressed to speak. :) I love it. Evil!Harry just kinda turns me on (not that you needed to know about that lol).

This is a pretty good one. I admit I like most of your story, the only one I don't like the Harry's bashing one

This has the foundations for a brilliant story. your one shots may sate your fanfiction urges but not me... will you ever write a full blown fanfic?

btw. this is the sorta harry i like. the dark hermione where she saves haryy is the one i like too.

THAT was very good. I really liked it. Its not an usual happy ending witht the Weasleys. Great work. =)