wow this was gr8. and, i liked tht press and saint dane were frends, tht seems more rite thn them being enemies. anyways, this would acutally b a good part of the book if it were added, it's a TOTAL twist. very gd

OMG! A very good take on what may have made Saint Dane "evil" to begin with. Gotta love a guy who loves his daughter. Very nice.

wow, that was AMAZING.

i love it. written just like it was from a book.

That was pretty good. What i just want to ask it this, Where did u get the idea for Press and Saint dane to be friends? It was a good idea, also, why did u choose Veego? She was supposed to be from Veelox right?And how did she become a traveler anyway? I dont want you to get me wrong, though, i thought is was great. U shouldwrite more.

oh...cool!! I like it! Please keep going with this one!!