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Reviews for: A Turning Point
KimCSI
2008-03-28 . chapter 17
I just wanted to let you know how extremely well written I thought this story was. It's amazing the places Google can lead you to :)
WhiteWingeDove
2007-12-23 . chapter 17
I loved your story! It was great! I thought it was realistic in the way it matched up with the actual episodes. I felt so sorry for Gris and Sara with everything they went through. But you gave it a great ending. I mean, what's cuter than Gris cuddled up next to Sara with his arm around her? Too cute. Great story.
Woodentree
2007-05-09 . chapter 3
As this is one of the first CSI fanfics I'm reading I'm very happy it's such a good one as yours. Just one thing, there seems to be a problem with chapter 4 as it just suddenly stops. Maybe just an error with the formating, but still, I'd hate to go on reading missing important stuff. Especially if it's really good writing like yours. :)
Idiosyncratic Enigma
2007-03-15 . chapter 17
I totally loved this story. The way your story was interwoven with the episodes was seamless and your characterizations were spot on. I especially loved the bits between Nick and Sara. Thanks for writing such a great story!
Bagpipedesaster
2007-01-28 . chapter 17
this story deserves more reviews! Well done, sensitive, nicely written - a joy to read! thanks for sharing!
Quill-32
2007-01-08 . chapter 17
This is a great mingling of fic with ep--angsty enough and with a realistic ending. I particularly like the Sara/Nick friendship. I found it a bit unrealistic that they didn't cut her down when they found her, but other than that this is a great case file too.
crestal
2006-08-09 . chapter 17
I just spent all night reading your "A Turning Point" and i think that it is the best gsr that i've read. Most make sara out to be too weak, or grissom to be a complete softy, but you've managed to create a great balance. I also wanted to say cheers for working it in so seamlessly into the episode, i went through and watched it as i moved threw your fic and it was seemless.
Also, cheers on the nick and sara, it's always swept under the gsr development, and you brought it out rather well.
So, if there was a scale i would give you a 9.75 (-.15 because it makes me wish the actual episode was like this).
~Crest
satine
2006-07-10 . chapter 17
omgg. i love this story so much. aww the end was so awesome! i almost cried. almost. heh. you're a great writer...please keep writing!
Domo Arigato
2006-07-10 . chapter 17
I'm sorry this story is over but I'm happy for you because I realize it must have taken a lot of time and energy to complete. I remember the problem you had with chapter 4 and I always thought it was unfair because, although it was quite graphic, it was very well written and not offensive in any way. But I kept following the story after you took it to another site and I’m very glad you didn’t give up because what you did with one of my favorite CSI episodes is absolutely amazing. Your original story and the actual episode mix together perfectly. Congratulations and thanks for the ride.
bene
2006-07-09 . chapter 17
You definitly gave us a beautifull story.
The emotions you translated into words were touching.
A big thank you.
I hope to read more from you soon.
anonymous01
2006-07-07 . chapter 12
I've been glued to my computer for the last hour or so absolutely absorbed in this story. I love how you're weaving your version of events into the actual episodes, and the transitions are seamless. Solid writing, great plot - keep it up!
tokengeekshipper
2006-07-05 . chapter 7
Wow...you have done good work with the charactors. Catherine's protective stance even around Grissom was impressive, as well as Grissoms reaction to the photos. Very nice work and good plot. Looking forward to the rest!
Grace
2006-07-05 . chapter 7
Please continue! You're doing a great job with writing this story. It's emotional, but it hasn't become sappy and maudlin, as so many stories like this end up. Everyone is staying in character, and apart from a few spelling mistakes, you're a great writer.
sarah-vs-psycheotic
2006-07-05 . chapter 7
OMG! That is so emotional
bene
2006-07-04 . chapter 5
You give us a good portray of Sara.
I like the fact that Catherine can also be there for her in addition to Grissom (for the woman "touch")
Please continue. Thank you.
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