Dat shit is messed up!

This guy...this guy is unfucking believable.

Epilogue: Mojojojo takes over Citysville.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Childhooddestroyed

Kind of dark don't you think?

Any story that ia garbage and then mentions crabs should deserve to be shrudded into pieces. What are you 7 with a bad mouth? It's funny because it's so horribly written. People love your writing but this... oh sweet god. It's like I'm reading material where people under the mental age of 10 laugh at the word 'fart'.

Oh, this has some funny moments but this as a whole is trash. You could keep writing like this and never know the satisfaction of writing a good story.

Good luck.

I love how someone always dies at the end of your stories. :3 10/5

I haven't laughed this much in a very long time; thank you, good sir.

That sucked. Point Blank. -.- You are a sick, twisted, creepy, and morbid person -_-

fucking amazing

wat the fucking hell could you give some warning next time dear god woman there only in kindergarden damn wat did they ever do to you it was a show for little children just kidding loved it really funni

Now this is one funny hate fic.

It's one of the few I actually liked reading(:

Having fun fucking around with PPG fiction?

Nice reverse on every single details in the story.

:)

Dude, what the ass happened here? This story is wierd.

You know, it's pretty funny how you make "Him" into "Her". lol :)