Not bad at all... It's kinda rare to find pokemon characters dying... Surprising stuff but good yes.

this should probably be in the drama catigory, bu t other than that great fic for a first try!

Yeah, I know that Jessie has blue eyes. Stupid typo! I'll be revamping it and putting up a sequel soon, I hope. TTFN!

Jessie has blue eye. that's all i can say now, I'm really depresed

Awww! That was so sweet and sad _.

Aw... poor James! *silent tears* I hate the fics where one of them dies... and yet I love 'em! And yet I hate 'em! And yet I love 'em! And yet I hate 'em! And yet I love 'em!

Nonono! I'm not a big TR fan or anything, but I like Jessie and James, you can't end it like that! But even if you do end it like that, I still love it! Please write more, you are so good at it!

... SAD! BUT GOOD! Sad... but... good! Um... I need a thesaurus... that was a great fic I loved it! But it was so sad...

*sob* thats not fair, thats tragic! why do people kill off one of the people? is it too much to keep them alive? apart from the death it was a good fic.

Thats so sad! It made me cry! (not really but i do feel like crying!) Poor james!

Wow!Nice fic,amigo._

uhmm

Loved it but it's sooooo sad .

Oh! That was so sweet! Where was the tissue box in my time of need? ::sniffle:: Jessie/James 4ever!

Oh, that was so beautiful. And realistic, that's rare in fanfics. Nice job!