Stephen King would be very pround of you. You should send this to him!

Yeah, psycho car.
Liked this chapter as well.
Keep it up.

24k words and just 5 reviews now, and it's likely it won't go much higher. Maybe you should really consider putting this in the Stephen King section. You sure are taking a lot of effort, which in another project could yield much better feedback.

That's actually a decent story.
Hope to see a new chapter soon.
Keep it up.

This is awesome!
You choose a great S.K. story. You might think this is wierd but when I saw the summary for your story I only paid attention to the SxA and the Kensuke car, Shinji's Jealous of Asuka's New boyfriend. Plus I skiped the Prologue, but when kensuke frieghtened her saying DOn't hit her again. All I could think of was "This is reminestent of Christine" Then I red down below a few line. there it was.

Keep typing Please this is good!

If this was a Stephen King crossover, then it might have been better to publish it in that section. Evangelion is usually very sensitive in crossovers or inserts with western characters. It kind of kills the mood, extremely hard. The way it is now, you probably stand little chance.

I like ur story, cant wait to see what kensuke does. Keep up the good work.

Eh? This is obviously a crossover of Eva and the Stephen King book. Everyone should know this one. Anyway, I guess I get the applause. ;)

Pretty good so far. You've handled Aida's descent into madness pretty well.