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Pence-chan 8/4/06 . chapter 1
Guwah! I loffed it!
Peachy Lime Daiquiri 7/11/06 . chapter 1
I MISSED THIS? Oh, and by the way, I'm alive. I'm DCDDFD, or Fuzzy, except I changed my name because the other one was way too long...plus, I'm totally into Panic! at the Disco right now (but MCR's still my fave). Anyway, ever since school got out, I've been spending the time alternating between writing actual fanficcies and original fiction, and suffering an epic bout of writer's block.

I'm also searching for my Lion King and Shrek 2 DVDs. More info on my profile (I updated the thing, OMG). So that's on hold until I can find them.

On to the actual review. HOW DID I MISS THIS? I have been monitoring you guys, though apparently not as well as I thought. Anyway, this is totally AWESOME! I was gonna start crying halfway through...and the part with the hair. I was like, AW! That's so cute! And YAY for Harry Potter!

Oh yeah! I finally remembered the password to get into my email account (the one I set up for this), so I can finally get into that again and put up your chappie for CK. I shall do that ASAP, and then continue the hunt for those DVDs (I always lose things in my own house. It's so annoying).
luna me and the slithery-dee 7/7/06 . chapter 1
Purr-fect. cat mode XD
Vitreum 7/6/06 . chapter 1
very nice. I enjoyed it a lot. Keep it up.
Catchy Pen Name 7/5/06 . chapter 1
I liked it. Would have appreciated more fluff, but I like your vocabulary. :)

Also, this sentence:

"Remus smiled, and it hurt a little; it was the smile you see on a person who's just commited suicide, that realization that nothing ends pain."

Very depthy, I like it a lot. Kudos. :D
Goldylokz 7/5/06 . chapter 1
Yea Tonks! Right to take charge. Men are just plain stupid sometimes.
lime 63 7/5/06 . chapter 1
Cool! That was really neat but is it actually possible to stop being a morphethingy? Anyway it was great!
Raven 7/4/06 . chapter 1
Aww, that was cute. Something about the end with her hair turning back just like that was utterly perfect.
todd fan 7/4/06 . chapter 1
Aw, bask in the fuzzy love of it all!
MidCircleNine 7/3/06 . chapter 1
I feel like a retard with the way sitting here giggling my arse off by the way you ended your story. I'm just inexplicably wonderfully-happy. :) The story is wonderful; I love the way you switched about halfway through between the two points of view. You did that very well, by the by. The narrative differences were funny, between Remus' literate wordings and Tonks' 'It just slipped out, I swear!' notes. Very up with the cool-ness. And YAY to someone actually giving him grey-blue eyes! YAY! And again! I don't (Well, I /do/, but that undermines my point entirely..) understand the fascination with giving him amber/honey/brown eyes. XP

The characters are wonderful, it was great to them acting like themselves. And I think top billing should be given to Tonks' hair, as it just poured its heart and soul into the piece. Remus' eyes told wonderful tales of their own, when they weren't looking at the ground.. You are obviously marvelous friends with Syntax and Spelling, a relief to be sure. I find that they just keep things running so smoothly.

I'm a doof. I know. It may even be documented somewhere, in the Big Book of Doof-dom and General Wierdities. Or the like.

It really was a lot of fun to read. I had some wonderful mental images of the two as well, which is always welcome. Hope to see more of your work.
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