*"Very well. First Prince Tenchi, Second Princess Sasami. I hearby annex Planet Earth. You will oversee its... uh... well-being. Or something. I give up."*

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Funny! I love Tenchi/Sasami fics and this is one of excellent design. It's flow needs to be better though.

Other than the OAV (13.5 episodes, Tenchi continuity with LHWs) I have to say I've become a convert exclusively to Tenchi/Sasami pairings... there is just something about that couple... those two really understand each other in the series, I think, you did a pretty good job!

Nice short story. Keep it up. I want to know the Tenchi's gang reasons for leaving though. You kept the readers in the the dark about that query. Like why did Ryoko leave? Anyway I hope there's more chapters to answer my questions.

I like this. You're doing a great job.

It's nice to see that you decided to finish this story.

Loved the story. I am a fan of Tenchi sasami pairings and hope you do more in the future.

OMG i loved this story! lolz XD

good story

My, this is starting to get interesting. Finish the next chapter soon!

don't leave me in suspense. please, hurry and write more.

Keep writing! This fanfic is very, very entertaining. One of the other reviewers were right when they said you need a little help with transitions between scenes, but otherwise you're doing great. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I love this! Hurry up and write more, aks! You need better transitions between scenes, and what's a flashback and such, but still terrif! Canna wait for more ..

pretty damn spiffy. 'translation' I LIKE A LOT!