Big on concept, short on execution. I really like the set-up, but Jesus man . . . paragraphs. Divide this into paragraphs and lengthen it to about one-thousand to fifteen-hundred words and it will be money, baby. Money.

Lol

"flarg ensplrag?"
This scene was great. The whole story is great, so far. You mix my favourite movies up.

regards, Voodoo

I'm the Voodoodolly, but I like the idea of being jason's bitch better...*lol*
The first chapter is short, but kinda sweet. Could ya email me, if you post the second? PLEASE. I really liked it. But it was way to short. *sniff*

cuddles, Dolly/Jason'Hoochie ^_^

Good start. Update soon.