I can't believe that Raiden would use his powers just to cook a damn hot dog, I mean that man could've ruin the whole house by doing so!

As for Stryker...wow...all I can say was that I really felt sorry for the guy. I mean on his 18TH BIRTHDAY, his sister had the NERVE to invite a STRIPPER over his house WHILE his mother was there! LOL,AND she had to chase the stripper out of the house with a frying pan!! I wouldn't be surprise if Stryker was crying his eyes out that day.

Now that is what I call a triffling moment!

Great story, I'm adding this onto my favs :)

This is excellent. Awesome humor without degenerating to random plotless crap. I wish there were more fics like yours around.

Keep writing!

This is... the BEST fic I've ever read. And I've read some great fics.

Bravo!

Agreed, how DID he do it. Somehow I think he'll suspect structural cracks, lost steps and a broken BED FRAME on that 'We didn't go to the loft' idea.

Best to ya,

Kitsu.