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Reviews for: Happy Birthday, Get Well Soon
Yangyang
2007-07-10 . chapter 1
I can't believe that Raiden would use his powers just to cook a damn hot dog, I mean that man could've ruin the whole house by doing so!

As for Stryker...wow...all I can say was that I really felt sorry for the guy. I mean on his 18TH BIRTHDAY, his sister had the NERVE to invite a STRIPPER over his house WHILE his mother was there! LOL,AND she had to chase the stripper out of the house with a frying pan!! I wouldn't be surprise if Stryker was crying his eyes out that day.

Now that is what I call a triffling moment!

Great story, I'm adding this onto my favs :)
FireTeam Torch
2006-10-07 . chapter 1
This is excellent. Awesome humor without degenerating to random plotless crap. I wish there were more fics like yours around.

Keep writing!
Fenice Evangelista
2006-07-23 . chapter 1
This is... the BEST fic I've ever read. And I've read some great fics.

Bravo!
Kitsu Kurasei
2006-07-04 . chapter 1
Agreed, how DID he do it. Somehow I think he'll suspect structural cracks, lost steps and a broken BED FRAME on that 'We didn't go to the loft' idea.

Best to ya,

Kitsu.
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