This seems intriguing so far. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Oh I like how Kim has mature a bit and look forward to reading more of their adventures.

Wispr

Bloody good... I like how things turned out.

Wispr

Very nicely done and can't wait what you going to come with next.

Wispr

I really like how you did the traps and again doing a wonderful job with the character depth.

Wispr

LOL on what Shego did to Drak and how Shego and Kim are getting along is coming across very believable.

Wispr

Love the banter between those two and again great job with the visuals in the story.

Wispr

Love your story/plot line you got going here. Really got everyone's interaction done fantastically and how you put so much detail in a scene without bogging it down is very nice work!

Wispr

Very nice details you having in your story also love how alive the characters are!

Wispr

Bloody good story here and love whats happen so far!

Wispr

Have to say you got my attention and I also like the easy read your writing style is.

Wispr

so i guess ronald stoppable is the great grandson of jonathan... that's why sheila doesn't like him because she sees him as a threat to kigo... well sheila and mim had history together, not just together but being together in a romantic way right?

The second time through was just as good as the first.

Well done. The title was inspired by The Sword in the Stone right?

Bravo, really enjoyed how it turned out.