i like your writing style a lot. but the plot is sometimes overly dramatic. for example, you lost me at shuichi killing the criminal because that's, by FBI standards, a violation of police policy.

omg!! this is so beautiful!! my favourite pairings and i'm totally speechless but never the less, you did a great job in potraying their character.

I think I love you. This. Was. Beautiful! I absolutely portrayed their relationship. I really hope you write more stories about this couple, it's so hard to find it. Thank you thank you thank you! =D

I really love the symmetry in the story. One side's black, the other's white, and when put together, everything becomes gray. Well-written. There's a sad undertone to everything, and it's to be expected, I guess. :( Would like to see a sequel, though, where it doesn't end in grayness but in rainbow colors...

Well, in my opinion...It was good...
Gloomy, IC, full of melancholia... I love it...
And it's good to see a Shuichi/Shiho fic...Strangely, there aren't much stories with this pairing...
Well,add to fav...;)

thats so... deep... i think... wells it was cool and i really like it a lot
hope u keep on writing