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witchsbroom
2009-11-23 . chapter 34
Just love this story my third time reading it.
ceara1888
2009-11-14 . chapter 34
oh i just found this story. i wish you would write a sequel. i love the characters. perhapps the summer or even harry's next year. please?
Kirby77DP77
2009-10-31 . chapter 34
This was a very, very well written story. Thank you for putting it up for us to read. I thought it had an interesting plot, and you really had each character in character! Great job, and thank you soo much.

kirby
T
2009-09-29 . chapter 34
I hope you will get started on the sequel soon! I can't wait for the island story and sixth year then summer and seventh and possibly more! Great story!
darksidhe42
2009-09-15 . chapter 34
Oh wow! It's over. Now what? Good thing there's a sequil. Thank you so much!
loretta537
2009-09-15 . chapter 34
this was a great story! i hope you write the sequel very soon as i cant wait to find out what harry and his friends learn over the summer and what happens when they are back at school, not to mention of course when voldie is finally defeated
TLDriver66
2009-08-13 . chapter 34
Wonderful story! I can't wait for the sequel. I noticed a small spelling error, when I was reading the part about Harry's Divination exam. You spelled Tarot wrong.
Abraxan
2009-08-04 . chapter 34
A fine end to a lovely story! Thanks for the entertainment!

Abraxan
Abraxan
2009-08-03 . chapter 32
I agree with your assessment of Harry's power - I really liked the lightning bolt part of the duel, BTW! Another lovely chapter!

Abraxan
Abraxan
2009-08-03 . chapter 31
I'm love Amicus - he's a great addition to your story. I loved how he rescued Harry and caught the perpetrator. My only quibble with the chapter is that Harry has been on his own all his life, so he's both independent and stubborn, yet you have him leaning on his grandparents and Sirius like a small boy. He's nearly an adult here. His lifelong habits are unlikely to change, not in public anyway. He might lean on them or rest his head on one of their shoulders in private, but I don't think he would do that in front of Kingsley, for instance. JMO. Other than that, it's another fun chapter! Well done!

Abraxan
Messrmarauder017
2009-07-31 . chapter 34
So much detail over so many chapters over a short period of time within the story. I love it! -CVQ
TeddyLupin67890
2009-07-29 . chapter 34
Great story. I just read it for the first time and I loved it. I have never been a huge fan of Snape being close to Harry, personally feeling that Snape is an evil git, but you really made the friendship believable.

I am looking forward to the sequel and am looking forward to reading what happens during the summer. I do hope that everything won't magically just happen to Harry and that we will see him work hard to gain knowledge. Tutoring over the summer months in dueling, wards, runes, ancient magics, and everything else would be great to read. I would also love to learn more about the history of the Ravenclaw family.

Please start a sequel soon.
Abraxan
2009-07-29 . chapter 27
I love the young griffin! And I always believed Harry was Gryffindor's heir - what fun that he's Ravenclaw's as well! And with Sirius being from a Slytherin family, Harry has some connection with Slytherin too. The only Founder he isn't related to somehow is Hufflepuff! Well, we knew the wizarding families all intermarried!

BTW, I just remembered something from an earlier chapter. You'd said Amelia Bones noticed the underage magic restrictions seemed to only apply to Muggleborns, that there wasn't a single instance of a pureblood getting in trouble for doing underage magic. Yet you'd just established that Harry's pureblood, since Lily wasn't Muggleborn, so there's your pureblood who got in trouble for underage magic. Just a point of interest.

Abraxan
Abraxan
2009-07-29 . chapter 25
Wow, cool ceremony! And it was fun to see Harry giggling and Snape grumbling. Very much in character for both of them. Nicely done!

Abraxan
Abraxan
2009-07-28 . chapter 24
Another very enjoyable chapter! Sorry, I don't see Harry with Susan or Luna (well, Luna MAYBE but as a girlfriend, not as his soulmate). Ginny's the one JKR prepared to be Harry's soulmate, even if she didn't develop the relationship enough in canon.

Abraxan
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