Oh! Please don't stop here! This is an awesome start! I love Mai's unlucky streak, and Vivian's well...Vivian-ness. Keep it up! Much love, CPOP

cute.

i love it please update soon!!

So cool.
Very unusual pairing with VV.
I would like to see this updated.

thats it? you gotta continue the sound of the pairings are too good! vivxvalon and setoxmai YAY

Well done! Continue plz asap

Oh, ValonGirl, don't be hatin'.

I personally like this fanfiction (mostly due to the fact that Vivian Wong is in it. It's so rare to find fics that don't portray her a negative light, so this fanfic makes me very happy.) ^.^

I'm adding this to my favorites list. ^_^

YOU ARE INSANE! WHY DID YOU PUT VIVIAN WITH MY BELOVED VALON! YOU SHOULD DIE!

Whoa there, lady. I didn't know you'd posted this!

I like your start here, and I'm lovin' the banter. Hope you continue. ^^

The ending was good. Mai is so very very snarky at times. ;DD

LOL! Poor Mai... I hope her luck gets better fast, but I'm not so sure since I cant remember who she's gonna run into here. "Just let me die clean." LOLOLZ XD AND MAI IS SO STEALING EVERYON... ER LADY LUCK'S BOFYRIEND LOLZ. XD

OMGUPDATEPLZ OMGOMG.
xD

For some reason, when I reread the ending I thought it said 'you bet your black **, i would.'

But, we'll never discuss that again. XD;

Marvelous chapter, dahling. Really. *gives cookie* I'M GLAD YOU FINALLY STARTED THIS, GAWD.

Can't wait to see who Mr. Mysterious Online Predator is!! *le gasp*

*does the 'first review' dance*

AND YOU BETTER NOT GET LAZY WITH THIS FIC LIKE YOU HAVE BEFORE GAWD. XD