Looks good, but you might want to tweak your dialogue just a bit.

You still have yet to answer the question of Daniel and Teal'c. This is a bit to easy. Both sides are too trusting.

Keep writing!

Ilike it! Keep going!

I'm enjoying this! I hope there's more, though.

I'm really enjoying this story, and I hope you continue to update it as often as possible.

I get the feeling that Sam Carter knows about The Doctor and Time Lords, even if it's on the QT.

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MEEP! lol... hell six months of groundhog day... i can imagine... but jack's antics were rather amusing!

lol... jack and him would get along so well like he does with daniel! lol, a friendship made in... well... in the ascended place? idk...

but very good anyways! more!

I like the different views.

Good story!

I'm looking forward to maore! Season ten on FRIDAY!

Yayayayayay...keep it up!

Cool it was good. Which actor for Doctor Who are you writing this with?

AH! This is like the 5th story I have read today and IT'S ANOTHER CLIFFY! 5 Cliffies in just two hours reading is FAR to many. Great story. Now can we have more please? lol.

Good I liked it.

Well, this is pretty cool, your story is combining my two favorite tv shows and it's written fairily well too. Just one question: is this story gonna beome shippy? I know your profile said you're a 'shipper. I just kind of want to prepare myself if it is; I 'ship Doctor/Rose, but Sam/Jack sorta annoys me if I don't know it's coming.

All and all, well done!

Hehe. yayayayayayayayay...update soon! *grins* These are great!

very cute! poor doctor, sometimes his swiss-chesse memory pops in at inoportune times! LOL!

jack and sam must be so confused with these two