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shingach
2009-05-17 . chapter 8
intriguing! canas is really the greatest shaman ever! and I thought about the fact that it is IMPOSSIBLE for florina, farina and the other peggy rider to be sisters!
INTRIGUING!
AngelKnightKyaro
2009-03-29 . chapter 8
This has got to be one of the most hilarious stories I've read! Keep it up :)
SmithyTheGreat
2009-02-06 . chapter 8
A really funny story, I liked how he always started off with 'Hello, I’m Canas, your guide to the strange and mystical world of Fire Emblem!'. Well, since I liked this story and such, the plot goes like this: if you accept the sidequest, you battle Aion the sage, but while you do that, Kishuna the magic seal, who blocks off all magic, appears along with his morphs and renders Aion's moves and his mages' moves useless. I think you should decide not to do that, since that renders his Camera Blob useless. Well, after that chapter, you meet Legault the thief and kills Darin, the Marquess of Laus. Afterward, you see Ninian controlled by Nergal and killing Eliwood's father, and as the Dragon's gate opens, Nils takes her away, making only one dragon summoned. The summoned dragon suicides(?) along with Ephidel, who was left to die by Nergal.

Hope that helped!
el unico hombre libre
2009-01-30 . chapter 8
this MUST continue! Canas is too frikkin awesome to stop here!
OMGWTFBBQ
2008-10-25 . chapter 6
well, Everyone else has pretty much answered your question about what happens next... but they were WRONG! if you get the sidequest after beating Uhai with Aion (who just so happens to be the same guy from Lyn's story) you can get a second sidequest by killing Kishuna (you have to have Nils to at least level 10 in Lyn mode) the sidequest is super difficult and doesn't give you much, but I'm sure that Canas would find it quite 'intruiging' If you haven't actually gotten this side quest, don't because it is pretty much pointless, all you do is learn some things about a gy who never talks. (and there are 2 more in the super-sidequest mini-series about Kishuna) so, add that in there if you want, but if you haven't played it yet, don't sweat it. (And (just to make you feel like there is a purpose to writing) this is the only fic that I seriously follow on this site besides Huzzah!)
SaoirseSpeir
2008-05-02 . chapter 8
"Thieves have a wide variety of useful skills—they can steal items from opponents, open locked doors and chests, see through fog, *and even escape Serra!*"

LOLZ.

"“Three different hair colors—lavender, teal, and dark blue—means three different traits. They aren’t even traits that can be blended, such as a white flower and a red flower cross-pollinating to form a pink flower. Really, if you do the Punnet Square on this situation, it’s nigh impossible to come out with three completely different shades…”"

ARGH! I have a Biology test on Monday which I haven't studied for and it's about animal responses and I'm so DEAD but--yeah. Back to the review!
I really like how you've set up this sort of back-and-forth banter between Canas and his wife - it reminds me of, well, Canas, and a 'shadowy' person muttering sarcastic quips in the shadows. Like a funny man-straight man routine. Heheh.
Connie Connike
2007-08-30 . chapter 8
Hahaha! I slapped my forehead so many times throughout this.
Canas is AMAZING.

So, anyways, even though your question has been answered probably 50hundred or so times, after killing Uhai, then he gives you directions to the dragon's gate, where Ninian gets taken away and you fight Lord Darin and a random paladin named Cameron. Then, you go to the gate itself, and the group sees Nergal releasing the dragon, but before it's released, Nils saves the day, Eliwood's father stabs Nergal, Ephidel is sucked into the dragon's gate, and Eliwood's father dies. Then, they go back to the port in which they came from.
Big Sister Kitty
2007-08-04 . chapter 8
Hey, you’ve improved.^^ I like the way you described the Dread Isle, it really comes alive. And I had no idea that the Camera Blob was sentient. o.O; Wow, I really must be slow. Punnet Square? You just couldn’t resist it, huh? XD I guess it might not be possible for co-dominance to take place here, too bad.

Correct me if I’m wrong, but I can remember that Canas’s intention for joining the army was to go to Valor, and this is further expounded on by his support with Renault. He had wanted to go there to study Morphs, I think, so it was more or less expected that you drop him in there.

Now, onto your question… Hmm, I believe that if you defeat Uhai within fifteen turns, you get to the Imprisoner of Magic chapter, the one with the magic seal? If not, then you go straight to Chapter 20: Dragon’s Gate, the one where you get Legault.

‘Til the next chapter then!
sagewolf
2007-07-26 . chapter 8
That's hilarious. And this fic's birthday is the same as mine! (intriguing...) If I'm reading the date right...yeah, it is. Yippee!

Have Canas document Della, and how she can tell everything that's going on on the battlefield even when there's fog or walls or god-knows-what. Have him document her game boy. That should be interesting. Waiting for update!
AStormIsBrewing
2007-07-16 . chapter 8
I just realized! . . . *trumpet fanfare* That you're the same author as the other fanfic, Huzzah!

V.V I feel stupid . . . . But another lovely story, very good reading after a long (but fun) day at bandcamp.

I have a few recommendations for study:

1) How people can dodge when they are asleep.
2) How Sleep cures poison, and viseversa
3) Why anyone would berserk a cleric, when they do nothing but run around for four turns doing absolutely nothing of interest(besides being berserked).

Farewell, then, if I can ever manage to spell 'then' right. I need more water. So . . . hot . . .
Rexnos
2007-07-12 . chapter 8
Wow... That is a good point... How DO the sisters have three different hair colors? It... it just doesn't add up! The punnet squares are never wrong! That must be one interestingly recessive gene... Hm... I need to take another biology class...

Anyway, the next level is the one with Aion the sage and Kishuna the magic seal, both quite study worthy, but lord knows how the camera blob is supposed to work around a magic seal...

However, the best conspiracy in the game comes up on the level after. The secret shops of course! How do they get all the best items (especially out on dread island, where nobody supposedly goes)? Why is it that people without a members card walk straight past it without seeing anything? What exactly does a members card do that allows you to see it? The questions are endless!

Anyway, funny stuff as usual. Like I said, the hair epiphany was quite enlightening. I hadn't even considered it!

Awesome,
Rex
RWT
2007-07-08 . chapter 8
XP Canas and his silliness continues! I so pity the wife and how she has to worry so much for her too oblivious husband.

Haha, the hair colors and being related or not. The next he'd probably be filming is why weapons break after a couple of uses or so XD.
RWT
2007-07-08 . chapter 5
“Hewo, I’m Hoo…”

His mother rolled her eyes. “Great. As if one wasn’t enough.”

-XD!
RWT
2007-07-08 . chapter 4
“Well, my dear, I had fixed Camera Blob about three days ago—goodness, it must have only been an hour after it was broken!—but I suddenly remembered you might be worried about me, so I have sent you this short documentary I shot watching grass grow to let you know I was alright…”

“YOU’VE BEEN ALIVE FOR THREE WHOLE DAYS AND YOU DIDN’T TELL ME?”

-Not to mention, you don't seem to worry how worried your missus was at all? Dang Canas, you're dense XP!

Concern passed over his wife’s face as she mopped her tea off of the screen of dark magic. Could she hope…? Would he really be coming home…?

“Perhaps…” Canas mused, “I should be getting home soon…EGAD, WHAT IS THAT INTRIGUING THING?”

-Better luck next time ^^;
peter
2007-07-04 . chapter 1
You have a point about the hair color. This also applies to Boyd, Oscar, and Rolf. Great chapter!
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