“One hundred and forty-four. Dumbass.”

OMFG THAT IS SO FUNNY YOU'RE HILLARIOUS! WHERE DO YOU THINK OF THIS STUFF? OMG THAT IS JUST DROP-DEAD FUNNY!

I love you!

Oh Very anti-Spiderman! lol still good!

Aw lol Amanda hates Spider Man! Somethings going to happen!

haha lol 144! Electro is clever! lol

I couldn't stop laughing at the first part 'I bow down to you Mr. Jameson' lol hahahaha

Aw Aunt May is completely oblivious! lol shes so sweet lol Peters smarter than that lol i found the end very funny lol

lol This chapter was hilarious i love sideys little comebacks an stuff lol

ok...Very stalker like...Amanda was quite cool about it though! lol

ooh! Peter was funny at the start its so good!

Not the enbding I was expecting . . . or hoping for. But, ok! I liked it. He's Spider-Man. Can't have the woman he loves (at least in the Ultimate-Verse) but he's allowed to parade around the city in tights. Aint life a mutha?

that's so sad... but so good. great job. ttyl. peaceout.

-wiccanprincess

Wow. I never thought of God being greedy. That's actually pretty deep.

Aw! Poor Spidey! Aw, well, that's life.

I love how you portray Carnage. Wonderful job! Very good. Keep it up, it's stupendous. It's one of my favorites. And I love on your profile how you said you write your stories for you only and that you don't care if people think that it doesn't seem right or in-character. You go girl! Keep rocking hard, do what ya love, and please make a sequel to Spider-Man: Redemption! It rocked!

OMG no way! Harry Osborn stole Spidey's girl! Love it!