That was really good.

Will you please write more?

great story! just one thing that irks me that i see very often in stories: it's lose, not loose. lose is the verb form of lost, and loose is what too-big pants are.

otherwise, great piece :)!

this is such an awsome story altho its left hanging u should so continue it i'm dying tryin to think of how it would end off cya

I do like this one, this is probably one of your first One shots that hasn't made me cry yet, but that doesn't meanit isn't good, I would love it if you could make more Sasuke and Sakura one-shots, and I would definitely love a sequel to this.

awe! I LOVED IT! i declare sasuke is mine. mwah even though i've only seen a few episodes.

That's really good. And I'm glad some one finally adressed the fact that in the time that Sasuke knocked Saukra out, he could have showed some emotion. lol. YAY! Tha's really good.

"She's so annoying. Yet I love her."

CUTE! D

and he actually smiled yet was still in character. great job. ]

Aw, that was so sweet. .

Aw...how cute! Dat waz touching. well gewd job!

Ja Ne

Make the sequal NOW!

again thats a sweet story

aww! that was so cute! i LUVED IT! just like surprise! please update that soon! and write a seguel to this too! I KUV IT!

i like this. it's nice. -yells loudly and continuously- SEQUEL! SEQULE! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!

plz make a sequel!plz plz plz

YO! That was so CuTe! I LOVE IT! *EVIL SMILE* BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!