Not your best work but still a very touching story indeed. Work on the grammar though.

My emotions are clashing. Particularly two. I want to squeal with glee and I want to sulk with sadness.

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A few words to describe your fic:

Kawaii, depressing, excellent, wonderful, spectacular, heart-wrenching, heart-stopping...

Okay, there are only so many words my brain can spit out at 3 in the morning. Damn, I have class in a few hours...thankfully not until the afternoon.

I very much enjoyed reading your story and will be adding it to my Favorite Stories list, of course. I see you have some other work that sounds interesting and I hope to get to it someday.

Keep up the marvelous work!

~*Eli

Hahaha, I'm glad your previous reviewers convinced you not to delete the story.

What can I say? Wow - the usual cliche word that people use when they can't find the right words, I guess.

I am in complete and total awe.

I like how you summarize the beginning of their relationship.

I also love how he explains how he changed because of her.

One other thing I can't believe that I failed to mention is how I am simply amazed at how well you write in first-person. Even though I've written a couple in that point-of-view, I don't like it very much. However, this was completely well done. I really felt like I was inside Syaoran's mind.

Excellent job!

*Ecstatically and reluctantly heading to the next chapter*

First of all, I'm glad you never deleted this story or else I would never have been able to enjoy such a wonderful piece of work.

As soon as I read the first paragraph, I knew there was going to be hell to pay.

*gaps* Eriol killed himself?!?!?! I've already called him a baka, so what the hell else can I call him?

Oh my gosh. *hugs Syaoran and Tomoyo*

That was a very interesting twist, though.

Huh, Syaoran finally admitted that he's in love with her.

He cut his hair...

*Goes on*

Ack! Poor, miserable Eriol. Baka. Good to know he didn't know, but for a guy in his twenties, he really acts like a lost teenage boy. Feel sorry for the poor sod.

I liked Syaoran's answer! 'Tis true, 'tis true, but not in the way Eriol probably took it.

*starry eyed* So maybe I'm a little twisted, but I was grinning so widely when Syaoran pinned her to the wall. Of course, that turned to pure giggles once they kissed.

Haha! The scene with Mrs. Hikaru was hilarious! Why? The argument that ensued, of course.

The last two sentences were great!

*Stares at preview, reviews, and dashes off*

Wow...I can't believe I went through five chapters without mentioning Syaoran's long hair... One word (or action): *drool*

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I have so much to say about this chapter, but I just REALLY want to get to the next one, so I'll breeze through...

Eriol and Tomoyo have serious issues to work through, obviously. Tomoyo is totally right; in real life, I don't think there can be any excuse for cheating, whether it's because your wife/husband/boyfriend/girlfriend has you sex-deprived, you don't love your partner anymore but are not willing to break-up with/divorce them, or you were drunk. However, I do hope Eriol and Tomoyo work it out.

Poor...hm...first I wanted to say Tomoyo and Eriol, but Syaoran's also popping into mind, Sakura too, a little... So poor all of them.

*Rushes off*

*claps hands*

The only thing that's confusing me is that there is no indication to the scene changes. I get it until I've read the first few sentences.

...Years of marriage and he knocks up a teenage girl... *sweat drops* Eriol-baka. So...does he know? 'Cause if he does, Sakura and Syaoran should be getting ready to beat him to a pulp.

"'Here you go, my dear.'

'Thank you good sir.'

'You two are doing it on purpose.'

'Of course we are Sakura. I think Li and I can become very good friends.'" -Why does this sound vaguely familiar...? Oh yeah, because my friends say that all the time about anyone who makes fun of me... Hahaha, poor Sakura, I feel your pain.

Ouchie, don't feel that pain, I'm afraid. Go Sakura!
"'If I remember correctly Mr. Li, you were not the model student yourself.'

'No and I never got off easy either.'

...

'What will Tomoyo say?'

'She'll ask if I beat him up good.'

'Did you beat him up good?'

'Tomoyo!'

'Yeah! I beat his ** to a pulp...'"

Ah! So many great and wonderful scenes.

Hehe, Tomoyo, Sakura, and Syaoran do make an interesting group.

*falls* Ack! Syaoran's mum is here~!

*sweat drops* Why do I sense a Tomoyo-Yelen collaboration...?

*Next*

I really should go to sleep, but you have me completely entranced...

Haha! Sakura showed up on his bed!

Aw! Poor Saku... =(

Darn it...here I thought I had gotten everything from the last chapter, but apparently not. I love how Sakura says Syaoran's her only friend in that place at the end. So adorable and yet so sad.

Yay! She called him Syaoran.

*snickers* Yue's portrayal is hilarious!

OUCH! Poor, poor Sakura.

"'I'm eighteen! You doofus!'

'...Just a moment ago you were balling your eyes out.'

'I'm still balling my eyes out...! You should shave again.'

'What! For pity's sake, you sit there with a broken arm or something and you tell me what to do!'" - Hahaha!

I love that part, but my favorite has to be: "'Miss, you have to let go of your boyfriend now. He can't go into the x-ray room.' 'I want to spoil his chances of having children ever again!'"

Kawaii! Syaoran comforting Sakura!

*Greedy for even more*

Ack! Of course, I also love how you added Sakura's weakness too! There's always something I forget to mention...

Yay! You added the "expect the unexpected" phrase! Nice!

*snickers* I love how she keeps calling him "Mr. Li." Weird, but funny at the same time.

Oh crap! (Excuse my language) Eriol's in love with Tomoyo, Eriol's in love with Tomoyo~! While he's married to Kaho! Lovely twist!

Hahaha! Oh man, Eriol and Syaoran are too much! Hehe...yeah, Eriol IS supposed to be the responsible one, Syaoran basically acts on instinct.

*cackles* "'Boys don't like girls who hit back.'" Classic!

*hugs Syaoran and Sakura* No matter their age, they will always be freaking adorable!

*More!*

I forgot to say before that I love a sarcastic Sakura!

I was right. This is going to be great!

Wow, I am amazed that English is your second language. I haven't found any mistakes. If there are, they're not so blatant. Believe me, when there are obvious mistakes, it makes me twitch and, so far, none of that. Haha.

Anyway... Hm...nice that they're so comfortable with one another even though they've only known each other a couple of days.

I think the only thing that confuses me is...school during the summer?

Muahaha, love how you added Rika and her...preferences. =D

*Keeps going*

I haven't read a Syaoran and Sakura fanfic in a long, LONG time. This story interested me from the summary, which is very rare.

I'm very glad that I stumbled upon yours, even if this story was done a while ago. It sounds like it's going to be very, VERY interesting.

^_^

*Continues*

Que bonita la historia!!

this is a beautiful story that is heart-breaking but also heart-warming. if you publish it, it would definitely sell well. it captured the correct emotions, making me cry and laugh at the right times. keep on writing more beautiful stories like this one, you just earned a new fan in me.

Meh! This is the second time I've read Apartments and I loved it just as much as last time! Totally and completely! :-D

IT'S SO GOD! I'M SO GLAD THAT YOU DIDN'T DELETE IT!