ok, so i finished reading this story back in june (of 08), but i completely forgot to review until now! but, anyway.. love this story so much! the ending was perfect! like i said, i loved it!

aw!very cute!

The song in chapter 16 is i'm Still Here by John Rzeznik! That is my favorite song of all times! i love the story & i love that you used that song! OMG! you ae such a good writer!

i just remembered an episode of bugs bunny where they were figthing over weather it was rabit or duck season only in your story its sparrow or swan season! love the story!


ps: pardon my spelling

JEWEL!! -sprays with sprite super-soaker- I love your fanfiction, mate! So far, I've only gotten to chapter 5, but I can safely say, it's one AWEsome story! You're a great writer, mate! -runs off to read more-

~OTS

I liked the flashback scene, very spiffy! Poor Jewel...

Hello Jewel! It's meowbooks from KTTC!
I was looking through the reviewers of stories I've posted and was pleasantly surprised to find you.

Lovely chapter, my favorite line is the last:

Then, the two ran into town to evade the hunters. For they knew that Sparrows were now in season.

That was GREAT ending! So sorry I have reviwed or updated in forever. soccer season is almost over so I'll be back at it soon. Expect an update before the end of next week! Again that was terrific ending to a great story. I'm really bumbed this story is over so right another Pirates fic! PLEASE! And again, nice job!

Wambachjr2

Good ending, i was expecting you to do something more different but oh-well! can't wait for the next story

awh YAY! i love the ending! a lil sad but all good things must come to an end as they say...but THATS WHY THERE ARE SEQUELS! ahahah looking forward to reading them!!

*~Dunedain Rose Thorn!

Lol. Yay! I finally reached ze chapter. lol. greact chappie by the way. i like the flashback thingy. :-D very cute. hope you update soon!

That was the best capter yet! Your writing is really really good! Plese update soon! i want to know what happens. sorry. i'm really busy lately. I'll try a dupdate as soon as possible.
Good as always.

Wambachjr2

Great chapter, I can't wait for the next 1, espescially to see if its the last chapter of em all! lol

so sweet. I like Jewel. Please update

Yeah. good story please update. Why does everyone hate norrington besides he's an idiot? Just asking