What about when Roxas said he wasn't the only one in Sora's mind?

Loved the whole story! More of this kind of adventures of Kingdom Hearts please! (:

I have to say this was a really cool story and liked some of the twists at the end. Bravo.

Just downloaded the PDF, mostly so I can take it with my on my phone. Very excited to read it, because I totally need something to hold me over until Dream Drop Distance. :)

And one of the longest stories I've read comes to an end. However, it ends in such a way that I always expected such an epic should... IF you would call it one.

I'll be looking forward to that sequel. ;)

~That's all I can say for now. So until next time, ciao!

Make the Epilogue

Well, if it's not too much trouble, could you maybe give the two librarians a happy ending for this story?

My reasoning is this: Both the Heartless and Nobody halves of the two librarians have been destroyed, and according to the official cosmology of the KH universe, if both the Heartless and Nobody of an individual is taken down, that person is then restored to life in its united, complete human form.

So why not have the librarians re-appear in their library in the epilogue and have them make peace with Sora, Riku, and Kairi? (And we can finally meet the female librarian in her original, human form to boot!) What do you say

Boo! Bad Story! Boo! Just joking! ;P

In fact it's the opposite of what I sai-, I mean type, but it's umm I feel there's some more in this story like please put an epilogue and also I can't wait for the sequel. :D

my jaw just dropped after reading that first chapter. you really know how to captivate an audience with your stories

well done

This story is amazing so far! I can't read the other chapters because I have to get ready for school, but I promise I will as soon as I get home. You're a fantastic writer; keep writing! ^_^

Neah Walker

Hey your story is pretty cool, keep at it okay.xD

After Reading Chapter 89, I kingmickey007 stated my review:

King Mickey 007: That was incredible! Poor Pete, I feel sorry for him. He fell straight into the darkness. Poor Sora, he couldn't even tell Kairi how much he loved her. Man...this is getting intense...at last Sora can finally fight Maleficent. This is it.

Queen Minnie 001: That was incredible, indeed, but we have to concentrate on our objective here. We have to find Mr. Trucker and White-Heart. They are in trouble...

Pluto-Zero: Good thinking...come on Riku, I know you can save Sora. You are the most powerful keyblade wielder out there!

Queen Minnie 001: Pluto-Zero, my dear boy, Riku and Sora are just friends! They are NOT gay!

At that moment all of the T.I.E. fighters stopped shooting, the X-wings and Y-wings stopped shooting. They all froze in fear. Even Mr. Trucker and White-Heart froze at this moment...

Mr. Trucker: Well it's about time somebody said it.

White-Heart: RIKU IS STRAIGHT? YOU MEAN HE'S NOT GAY? NOOOOO! :o

Mr. Trucker: White-Heart, my dear wife, you need to keep it down, and really, you are sick and twisted you know that?

White-Heart: I'M A YAOI FAN-GIRL! (crying) I WANT SORA TO FALL IN LOVE WITH RIKU! IT'S JUST NOT FAIR! :(

Mr. Trucker: (sigh, thinking) Man...we are so dead...I can't believe my own wife, the Admiral of the Rebel Alliance, is a yaoi fan-girl...sheesh...(looks at White-Heart and talks) Listen White-Heart, Sora is straight...he's not gay...okay White-Heart...Sora loves Kairi...okay sweetie?

White-Heart: Okay...(crying)...fine then...I get it...(wiping away her tears)...he's straight...he loves Kairi...and Riku gets nothing...fine...okay...let's go and kill Road-Kill and Fluffy...it's time to finish this.

And so, after the most controversial review ever written, Mr. Trucker and White-Heart were about to face their final match head on!

Wow I never thought that you would ever continue the story. This is great! Luv this story. I wanna see what's gonna happen to Sora and Kairi. Can't wait. Please continue. You're best! :)

Great story, but Maleficent is already dead but of course this is your story so it's okay :) well I really like it so keep up the good work.

Oh, snap! Update soon, okay?