 Sophiee :) 2009-06-02 . chapter 70 OHMYGAWD
i love this story!
its addictive!
YOU HAVE TO KEEP GOING!
you really have talent (:
keep writing (:
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 I am Larxene's Nightmare XoX 2009-05-24 . chapter 70After reading Chapter 70, I, King Mickey 007, stated my review:
King Mickey 007: Wow, the giant turtle was a Heartless? I didn't know that! I'm glad to know that Sa'luk is dead now. I mean, turned into Solid Gold...I hope that Sora, Kairi, Aladdin and Cassim escape from the giant Heartless...Nice chapter...This story is the BEST FAN FIC I ever read! Keep up the good work. I'm loving it! Speaking about escapes though...how do I escape the clutches of Jabba the Hutt? Where's Queen Minnie 001? Where's Pizza Hut? I guess they're all locked up in this flying ship too...dang...It's been months now...I'm hungry...oh my gosh...and my keyblade can't seem to unlock my stupid cell...stupid cells are Keyblade Proof...I can't attack the cells, I can't break them...and I can't open them either...sigh...what am I going to do?
Random Evil Soldier: Attention all bounty hunters, Luke Skywalker has just got his lightsaber, Han Solo just killed Boba Fett and furthermore, Princess Lea just strangled Jabba the Hutt...all battle stations now!
I scream for help...but it was no use...before I knew it...the whole ship exploded...my keyblade summoned a forcefield...the flames were all around me...the barrier my keyblade made was very strong...I had a gut feeling that my keyblade summoned more than just one force-field...It felt like I was summoning an infinite amount of force-fields, it was almost as if the keyblade was more powerful than I thought. I soon felt weak and fainted into darkness... |
 KeybladeWeildingHobbit 2009-05-12 . chapter 70hey
I just thought i'd suggest you get the Sora Kairi relationship underway as it is the 70th chapter and nothing has happened in their relationship yet.just thought i'd throw that out the,keep up the good work.
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 Shad52 2009-04-13 . chapter 70Best kingdom hearts story ever. plz write more soon. |
 heylibertine 2009-04-03 . chapter 69glad to see that you are back :)
can't wai for more! |
 Redwolf088 2009-04-02 . chapter 2 awesome chap man
keep up the good work
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 Redwolf088 2009-04-02 . chapter 1 Pretty damn good intro for your story
keep up the good work
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 I am Larxene's Nightmare XoX 2009-04-01 . chapter 69King Mickey 007: Wow, I can't believe it! The author is still alive! Hooray! Wow, Sora and Kairi are now on the giant turtle!
Queen Minnie 001: 007, no spoilers! Whatever, I'm glad that Sora and Kairi were rescued by Genie. I was concerned and worried that Sora and Kairi would be stuck in the desert for ages or something...thank goodness...speaking of which...goodness...we have been on Planet Tatooine for months now. I must say, their classes are tough...I really hope we get off of this planet soon, it's like a huge hot desert.
Pizza-Hut: Listen you two, the Bounty Hunters are after an artifact that is called the "Hand of Necro". Whoever wields it can turn anything into genuine silver!
Sea-Key: Pizza-Hut, the Bounty Hunters are back and they got the Imperial Fleet backing them up!
The Imperial Fleet and the Bounty Hunters charge into the innocent village and knock us out fast! I soon wake up, I was bolted down in chains. I was unable to move and I soon see Jabba the Hutt, an evil mobster gangster-slug. The evil slug gangster lord smiled and pulled out the Silver Hand, my keyblade is summoned and morphs into a monstrous looking key, the keyblade snarls and growls. Jabba the Hutt touches the Ultima-Weapon Keyblade with the silver hand. My keyblade soon turned solid silver. My keyblade was now genuine silver! I realized soon enough that Jabba the Hutt had found the "Hand of Necro". |
 Aney 2009-04-01 . chapter 69Thank you, thank you, thank you!! I have waited for this capter, and I really enjoyed it. Your such a great writer! Keep up the good work! |
 Shire Folk 2009-04-01 . chapter 69Well that certainly was anti-climactic and a very simple way to skip through the dramatic bits of the story so we could get right to the fighting with Sa'luk over the Hand of Midas: Bring in Genie.
Still, it was a pretty good way to summarize it all, and I liked the image of Sora and Kairi simply gazing up at the stars on their backs together.
May the Grace of the Valar Protect You
Shire Folk |
 missladylaura 2009-04-01 . chapter 68Wow, this is a really good story...
Best one i've read in a long time :D
Can't wait for the next update. |
 Hannah/Hikari 2009-03-20 . chapter 30 OMG! Your so good at writing, do you know that? I'm a total kingdom hearts freak, but this has to be the best one out of the other...1...2...3...298 fanfics I've read, and I'm serious! This is a work of art! You should be a writer when you grow up, that is if your not already a grown up... I'm only 14 but I LOVE reading fanfics. There is one called "unexpected love" It's a Naruto/Inuyasha fanfic. That was the best one I had read, but this... THIS IS MAGNIFICENT! =3 KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! AND PLEASE UPDATE SON! X3
Hannah loves yall! |
 Kaay 2008-12-06 . chapter 68hey this is a really good story
any idea when its going to be next updated? |
 I am Larxene's Nightmare XoX 2008-10-27 . chapter 68Queen Minnie 001: That was awesome, I love how Kairi knows how to drive horses and all...that's cool!! Hehe...I know how to ride the Huge Rams here on Tatooine...lol...and...oh crap...Jabba the Hutt and his Bounty Hunters have come back...#$@#$%$%^!
King Mickey 007: Oh man...NOT Again...(Queen Minnie 001 and I, King Mickey 007 pull out our Keyblades and we get ready to fight. But Pizza Hut just used "The Force" and "threw" the EVIL MOB GANGSTERS right into their spaceship above and they were defeated...in fear...Jabba the Hutt, Mini Hutt, and the Bounty Hunters flee for good...the villagers come out and thank us all...I, King Mickey 007, look at Queen Minnie 001 and I ask the following questions...)
King Mickey 007: 001, as Pluto-Zero and I were hanging out on Earth...you were traveling and going threw different worlds and planets? Is this why you have been gone for so long? Is this why you know Pizza Hut and Sea-Key?
Queen Minnie 001: Yes, it's true...I didn't want you or Pluto-Zero to worry about me...I was trying to help the Rogue Squadron Rebel Forces to halt the Evil Imperial Galactic Empire from advancing any further...(I look at her confused and in amazement)...to make a long story short...I allied myself with Pizza Hut, Sea-Key, Luke Skywalker, Princess Lea, Han Solo, etc. to stop Road-Kill, Darth Vader, the Emperor, etc. from killing our World-Planet "Earth". (I start to cry, 001 hugs me.) I wanted to protect you and Pluto-Zero...but when Maleficent came back...Road-Kill came back...(Queen Minnie 001 is just like Kairi-she has a pure heart and a strong will! I'm just like Sora-noble, powerful, kind, but foolish, Pluto-Zero is like Riku...dark, alone, Riku cares deeply for Sora...also, Pluto-Zero cares deeply for me.) |
 I am Larxene's Nightmare XoX 2008-10-27 . chapter 67After reading Chapter 67, I, King Mickey 007 stated my review:
King Mickey 007: That's amazing, it's like watching, Aladdin and the Forty Thieves all over again! It's brilliant! It's amazing!
Queen Minnie 001: I agree, it's amazing, it's like word for word...I love Kingdom Hearts fanfics that are almost like a particular Disney movie...that's so cool!
Pizza Hut (The Jedi Knight Lobster): I understand 001, it is amazing, but we need to stop Jabba the Hutts' attacks...because he seems to be getting ideas from the 40 thieves...what this Cassim guy does...Jabba the Hutt is sure to do the same...
Sea-Key (The Keyblade Wielding Crawfish): OF COURSE! HELLO?! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN 001?!?! YOU HAVE FOUGHT JABBA THE HUTT BEFORE WITH US MANY TIMES BACK THEN, YA' KNOW?! WAIT...IS THAT YOUR BOYFRIEND?! (Queen Minnie 001 blushes) HE IS ISN'T HE?! HE MUST BE FROM THAT WORLD..PLANET...UH..."EARTH"...THAT'S RIGHT "EARTH" THE NEWS IS ALL OVER THERE...THAT WORLD IS DESTROYED ALMOST COMPLETELY...AND THAT #$@$#@%#$@% JABBA THE HUTT FUNDED THE IMPERIAL FLEET ATTACK CAMPAIGN ON THAT WORLD! WAIT...WHY IS YOUR BOYFRIEND SMALLER THAN YOU ARE?! (But then, Jabba the Hutt charges on back with a smaller counterpart of himself, "Mini Hut", further more, Boba Fett and the robot "IG-88" charges at us)... |
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